good start! can't wait to read the next chapter.

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It better get happy at the end! I really liked it! I'm right on the verge of tears! Please update soon! :7)

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I loved it! I'm so glad Luna was kind to her! I loved it! :7)

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OOH!! She said he was dead?! I loved it! :7)

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We wouldn't want this box to starve would we? So I'll fill some of it. I really liked it! So I guess she like thought it was Draco but it was Harry! That would be so weird! I loved it! Poor everyone, especially Hermione! Great chapter! :7)

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OOH!! I wish she wouldn't get so emotional! I guess she has a good reason though! I loved it! :7)

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OOH!!! Poor Hermione! It's making me cry! I loved it all the same! :7)

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Oh my!! I'm kind of glad for that but I hope the plan still goes quickly and well! I loved it! :7)

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OH NO!! Poor Hermione and Draco! Why must this happen?! WHY?! I hope all goes as planned and quickly he can return to Hermione! I also hope that she doesn't go to Ron. I loved it! :7)

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OH NO!! Well I guess it's going to come out sooner or later! I loved it! :7)

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OOH!! She better pick Draco! I loved it! Poor everyone though! :7)

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OOH!! Now I bet Blaise will fall in love since he said he never would! It's like a jinx. I loved it! :7)

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OOH!! I really liked it! I wish she hadn't told Ron that and done that with him though! I mean he is going to be sooo hurt! Poor Ron! I loved it! :7)

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OOH!! I hope Ron or someone doesn't come in! I loved it! :7)

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A HIGHLY APPRECIATED REVIEW *said in a very official voice*
Poor Ron, but really is was way to slow! I loved it! The seen was great! I loved it! :7)

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its awsom u r reli talentd

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OOH!! I loved it! The end was quite funny! Great start! :7)

Author's Response: thank you thank you =]]

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hilarious! lol i laughed starting with snape catching them until the end =D

Author's Response: haha well I'm glad you enjoyed it :DD

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so wait does she actually like draco or was that a dream or what? .so she...he umm?sorta confused.But I'll like the story when I understand it.


Author's Response: YES that was a dream..& of course she likes Draco she just thinks he betrayed everyone :o

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I like the twist of how she sort of ran to Ron ^^ Also, kudos to making this chapter romantic without making it TOO explicit or dirty

Author's Response: agh yes yes i appreciate all your reviews! thanks again! :]

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I don't think that Hermione and Draco would move so fast... but I do like the part with Ron and Harry... can't wait to see what happens during their detention ^^

Watch out comma use and be sure to use them to separate names from the rest of the sentence... it'll make it a bit easier to read... otherwise, it's pretty good ^^

Author's Response: thank you for the grammar tips :D i always need those lol

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I love reading Draco/Hermione fanfic, and it's hard to come across one that is really well-written! Great job so far, can't wait to read the next few chapters :D

Author's Response: thanks for the compliments!

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ah I absolutely love that song!

Author's Response: yesss! me too! its so well written!
thanks for dropping a review! :]

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“So how was he? Did it feel like making love to a God?!” omg thats the best line fricken ever lol Noice! lol I love the plot tho nice job

Author's Response: lmfao yeah yeah i loved that too xDD
& thanks for the review =]

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OMG! I loved that! ANd there little boy. OMG he is so cute and perfect! I love this! But I hope that Harry and Ron are okayish. I have my fingers crossed that at least one of them lives! Update soon! Thanx! 10/10

Author's Response: lol yeah i hope they live too haha [winks]
thanks for your review! i appreciate it :D

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