The characters and the situation is developing nicely but as before more time needs to be spent proofreading before submitting. I'm looking forward to the next installment.Author's Response: Ok thanks .. yeh i was typing those two up fast casue i was getting a new computer and wated those two done and out of the way .. I haven't really been working on Chapter 3 casue i've been working so much but tomorrow i'm ging to work on it when i get home from school so it might be up soon .. thanks for the review keep them coming please !!
-Cami Report Review
The plotline of the story is quite good and I like the way you 'draw' your characters. The story would be improved by a bit more time spent proofreading in terms of spelling and grammer - at times the story becomes confusing because of this.The dialogue between the characters is generally good and quite entertaining. Report Review
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