Finally, a mature, intelligently written story about James and Lily. I encourage you to keep going.
You are very descriptive and have been keeping me on the edge of my seat. I look forward to more chapters.

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that was one of the most amazing pieces of writing i have ever read :D

I can't wait to read on

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Finally getting around to reviewing your story. This was such a lovely chapter. Probably the most realistic love scene between the innocent I have ever read in fan fiction. Can't wait to read what Dumbledore wants to discuss with Lily. I know there will be an interlude first. Hope you are close to finished with that. I know that you originally intended to get that out last year. Anyways, this story continues to captivate me even though the chapters come so slowly. I know that you are very busy with school and wedding plans and such. I wish you well in both your life and your writing. Blessings, Gen

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In a word : Incredible! You have given these characters dimension and realistic relationships that I have never seen in fanfiction. I was sooo excited to see an update and I can't wait to see where this goes! Keep it up!

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kinda sad thats its been so long. is this abandoned?

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wicked! come on, you've got me on the edge of my seat!
tis great how you write and make it all plausible, how hard stuff would actually be for them instead of underexaggerating.

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Wow- I love this story! The writing is really good.
Update soon please!

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this chapter was amazing
i can't wait for the next chapter
keep it up

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One of the best written, and most enjoyable fics I have read in a long while! This is a wonderfully intense chapter; a nice change from the usual bit of fluff I encounter :) Please update soon!

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That was wonderful. =]

I was so excited to see an update. I really love this story, I've been reading it for a long time and I'm always excited to see more. I also find the interlude's interesting I haven't come across a story set out look yours before.

The writing is great, and you really have charcterised Lily and James well, this chapter was so enjoyable.

Can't wait for more. 10/10

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beautiful!! it just keeps getting better and better!

your characterization is so deep and the whole story is just amazing!

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oh i love your story! please update soon, either here or on the other website that you use! :)

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woow. this fanfic is really really good. its so ... different. their relationship is so much different to usual - james isnt all lovesick and chasing after her, lilys not all "omg i like him what to do?" and the way you've described how the war's affecting them is so effective. i've never botherd to stop n actually think about that. update soon!

x.X.x

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fantastic chapter.

i love the way you write and the description you use.

can't wait to see whats going to happen.

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Wow!! perfect! I love the way you got them together:) Please, please UPDATE this brilliant story AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!! can´t wait!

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I absolutely, positively love this story! The cliff-hanger is brilliant, i can't wait to find out what is going on (odds are a death eater attack, but hey, you never know)! keep up the amazing writing!

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Wow, I think this is the best chapter so far. :D You write amazingly - this has always been one of my fave stories! I really hope you'll update soon. :) 10/10

Oh, yeah, btw, it was really cool how you worked the Snape/Lily stuff from DH into your story so naturally. It really added another layer of realism to the plot.

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I've been waiting for this chapter for ages. Lily and James finally being Lily and James.

Horray!!

This was wonderful. I really liked Lily's examination of the Ministry. Very well done.

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oh no!!
go james!!
update super soon!!

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Wonderfully well written. I can't wait to read the rest.

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Yeah! Go Frank! Lol. I've been waiting for more! This story so far has been terrific. And this chapter was no disapoitment. You could totally write a book! I hope you put the next chapter in as soon as possible! 1,000,000,000,000,000,000,000/10
Your Very Hapy Reader,
~Ginny~

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great story so far
update soon!

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Loved it as usual! Thrilled for an update; it's about time. Please update soon! Cannot wait to see what happens next!

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you are an amazing writer. I am so impressed and to be honest, this is a rare thing when reading stories posted on this site. Your mature tone & original voice makes this piece worth reading, I hope you have more up soon, until then- I will continue to read!

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That has got to be one of the best L/J stories I've read. I mean you even sound smarter than JKR sometimes in there! lol I am a blithering idiot...
~Amy

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