Reading Reviews for Haunting Past
7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by ashley5895 Snape's rival

13th July 2006:
lol i cant wait 4 more hurry up wit it more more more

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Review #2, by ashley5895 New Ideas

17th June 2006:
i like it !!! more more more i cant wait for more!

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Review #3, by ashley5895 When Arena's call...

23rd May 2006:
omg!! write more soon!!! hurry up with it!! i love it hurry up with more!! how could you leve it there u meanly!!! lol

Author's Response: it'll come soon

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Review #4, by MasterfulGamer Hogwarts

17th May 2006:
Ashley is a perfect example of what i said you read, you are propelled through the chapter so you want more and more and more...i havent seen another story on this website half as good as this

Author's Response: is this a pep talk or a serious review,?

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Review #5, by MasterfulGamer Visit from Vandermine

17th May 2006:
It's beautiful...the "unknown past" section propels you through the chapter and leaves you wanting more. However, by doing this you are setting yourself up for an ultimate climax which will be expected to be amazing. If you fail to end it well, it may ruin the story.

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Review #6, by ashley5895 Hogwarts

11th May 2006:
love it!! more more more

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Review #7, by ashley5895 Visit from Vandermine

27th April 2006:
i love it so far. its a little like 'what' but its good. i hope more of it is explained later i. write more soon!!

Author's Response: Thanks. I'll explain a lot later

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