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Review #1, by Fleur Delacleur

25th February 2007:

Really awsome plot! i absolutley love this story
you might want to check it sometimes for plotlines. like in the second chapter you mixed Remus and Faith up twice i believe
but its well written
love it
~Fleur

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Review #2, by girl15_rocks

Never Have I Ever...

17th May 2006:

Awesome story! Keep it going!

Author's Response: Thanks

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Review #3, by girl15_rocks

Seeker and You're it

17th May 2006:

That was great! Good job! But, there are quite a few grammatical mistakes. Check them out.

Author's Response: i was never good in english...

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Review #4, by girl15_rocks

Wrong destination

17th May 2006:

That was very good for a beginner. Keep it up! But, I couldn't help noticing a mistake. James refers to Lily's mum as Mrs.Potter. Mrs.Potter would be James' mum, right?

Author's Response: thanks for telling me :)

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Review #5, by Fleur Delacleur

Wrong destination

9th May 2006:

oooh the drama!!!!
really good for a start
i just wrote my first fan fic to
well i guess in America they say:
"im de-virginizing your comments or reviews board"
lol
brava
xoxoxo
~Fleur

Author's Response: Well thanks for that :)

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