Reading Reviews for Driven to Freedom
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Review #1, by marauderqueen Driven to Freedom

26th August 2009:
Ha I liked it alot. You got all the characters down well.

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Review #2, by harrylilyjames Driven to Freedom

20th September 2007:
awe, i loved it... i never actually tought of what would of happened when sirius got his bike for the first time.. it was really good and nicely written... good job. =) ~hlj

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Review #3, by RemusBlack Driven to Freedom

21st July 2006:
wonderful! Absolutely wonderful. You`re a great writer. :O)

Author's Response: Thanks, again, hun! You make me smile. :D

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Review #4, by Deli Driven to Freedom

22nd June 2006:
That was such a lovely story.
Sorry but i did laugh at the end when it said 'the handle bars of freedom'.
I dont know why though.


Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it. :) Wonder what caught your fancy about that line? Hm.... Either way, thanks for the review!

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Review #5, by author of seven Driven to Freedom

22nd May 2006:
Short, and yet meaningful [to say sweet would be more of a cliche than I'm willing to make XP]. You have impeccable grammar and spelling, something that I greatly admire in writers. All in all, great job, and you deserve a 10!
Hugs, Al

Author's Response: Aw, thanks Al'loff. :) I'm glad that you enjoy it!

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Review #6, by JacoIII Driven to Freedom

26th April 2006:
Response to review request:
Are all your stories this short? I've read two now and neither went over 700 words. Whatever, reading this is like getting a boost of adreneline, short and sweet. I have a couple of suggestions though: I recommend that you mention the shop where Sirius bought the motorcycle. I also recommend changing the last line. I just don't like "handlebars of freedom" I'm sure you can come up with something better.

Author's Response: No, they are not, thank you. Just above one that you all ready reviewed is a ten-thousand word story.

I don't have the slightest idea what sort of a shop name to give said place, so I really can't add that. And I was rather fond of the last line, so I think that I'll keep it unless I get other requests to change it.

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Review #7, by Riddle Wood Lupin Driven to Freedom

25th April 2006:
Oh, wow. :) I loved the whole argument about the bike's gender. That was ingenious. And it fit them all quite well. I also quite enjoyed James's reaction to the bike flying. Well done. ;) Although I believe it could be a lot longer, it was pretty well done for such an idea. And I couldn't even find anything wrong. ;)

I can't wait for some more stories from you, m'dear!

-Riddle Wood Lupin

Author's Response: Thank you! I really loved writing that piece of it; it was foolish enough to make me laugh while doing it. I would have made it longer, but that may have taken away from the moment of it, and I didn't want to risk that.

No worries, I have a few things on the way. ; )

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