You have GOT to make new chapters, love. This story is beyond awesome. I give it. 1000/10 and that's saying something. Please write more. Report Review
Awww.please continue it, don't stop! Report Review
i think this is really clever!
well done (: Report Review
I like this story please keep it coming. Report Review
that was really good!! I have not been on in a while so i was just checking all the stories i have in my fav to se eif there were any new chapters!! I saw that you had written 4v more since the last time!! they were all really good!! and i can not wait to see what happens!!! does camille finally forgive sirius ( I would he is absolutly amazing!!! I know he is a book character but i would so go out with him if he were real!! ) LOL anyways can not wait to read the next chapter!! bye!! Report Review
WOW sas that was awesome!!! omgg why did u hav to end it like that!!! i want more soon, dunt u dare take long like last time!Author's Response: Thanks! Haha, I love cliffhangers, they give me the satisgfaction of knowing something that no one else does! Report Review
i like the still before the storm better. and omggg hurry up with the next chapter. if i didn't love you so much i would hate you for keeping us all dangling like this. lol, jk love. it was awesome. but yeah hury up with 14 now lol Report Review
That was...AWESOME! Report Review
great chapter! and great story!! i've just re read it all through, as i couldnt remember where i'd got up to before, and i love it! update soon!!!
rose :) Report Review
OMG write more chapters! Report Review
hello m'dear excellent chapter once again.
lolz and im gunna let this summer slide babe but i demand a new chapter soon! keep up the fantastic writing and btw... pet was out with vernon... i feel an ATE flashbak here ;-) Report Review
wow! great chapter!! update soon pleazz!!!
10/10!Author's Response: Thanks for the reveiw- I'll update as soon as inspiration hits me! Report Review
i am so so so glad i only just found this story because if i had found it before you updated, i might have cried. its hard to find a marauders story that is unique but still canon and this one is!! 10/10 for sureAuthor's Response: Thank you so much, I'm so glad to hear that- I worry sometimes that its too cookie-cutter! Report Review
update please.Author's Response: I'll do it soon! Report Review
I am absolutely loving this story. The switching of viewpoints is a perfect way to tell it, and the subplots are just as captivating as the main. Way to go!Author's Response: Thanks, I didnt want it all to be J/L, and although the subplots are a bit basic sometimes, its great to just be able to write plain old fluff! Report Review
a serious review.
i liked the chapter as a whole, but i just don't see the part where james hugs sirius happening in real life. i mean, it's apparent that they do care for each other but they don't seem like the type to discuss feelings. something like james punching sirius with the main message of "what the hell is wrong with you" being portrayed from his words. cuz we'll imply what he's really trying to say.
but otherwise, excellent.Author's Response: A serious response.
I guess you're right about the hugging thing. It just seemed like the right thing to put in at the time, and I'm a sucker for best friend relationships, and those rare moments where you see how much they care, especially with guys, really. I couldnt resist putting the hug in. Report Review
action on the train. ohdee.Author's Response: Why, thank you Kanal Report Review
well, not exactly a cliffhanger at the moment, since i can just click the arrows and find out what happens...but still marvelous.Author's Response: Thanks so much! Report Review
so i reflect back on this after having read it (twice?three times maybe?).
still very fulfilling, i must say.
Author's Response: I think you meant fufilling in a good way... right? Teehee, well thanks either way! Report Review
Of course we know that!
Nice; relationship troubles indeed!
I can't wait to find out what happens now.Author's Response: Thanks, I'll update soon, promise! Report Review
hey excellent chapter james n lily are sooo cute x10 to the 891374198298 power lolzz hurry up wit da next one plz lols luv yaaa baybeAuthor's Response: I know theyre adorable! Report Review
aw james n lily are so sweeett!! great update, hurry up i need another one!Author's Response: teehee, I know theyre just the right amount of awkward! Report Review
I loved it! Kepp going!Author's Response: Thanks! Report Review
i was getting used to the next chapter just sitting there waiting for me to click on it. i guess you dont know what you got till it's gone, they paved paradise and they put up a parking lot. did i not mention this before? i break out into song very often. anywayz i absotootly loved it and i cant wait for more. amazing, simply amazing... until you write and i read dear author. =]Author's Response: Teehee, I'll get the next reveiw out ssoon (and i love you're spontaneus songs; they made me smile!)! Report Review
OHH YEAHH! MINI TRIBAL! OONGA CHUNGA! [(now does a really sucky impersonation of lil jon's "yeah")] until next chapter my dear sweet author!Author's Response: Teehee, im glad! Report Review
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