Good job inventing an actually interesting spell, most of the ones that people make up are really uncreative. Great Story too!
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great story please updateAuthor's Response: Will do x Report Review
Hey, good story! I only had time to read this chapter but I'll read da others when I get home from school (or during business class, so i don't fall asleep) You're very good at descriptions too. Keep writing!Author's Response: Will do and thanks for de review ! x Report Review
Sorry but a kid teaching Dumbledore Legilimency?Author's Response: Dont like it dont read it ok !?! Report Review
these story's are great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
they are one of my faviorate series on this sight.
I can't wait for the next one,
Luv Ya BLUE-ROSEAuthor's Response: Why thank you ! Next chapter for this story should be on soon :)
Love ya to :) Report Review
Oh my gosh. If it's possible, I'm even more impressed. No, impressed is too little a word, and I can think of one better at the moment. But this was an AWESOME chapter!
In your words, 20/10Author's Response: You really think it was a awesome chapter ? Really ? Thanks you so much !
20/10 !?! Thank you so much ! Report Review
very nice chapter I must say ;)
But where was Remus? :(
10/10, because the writing is very well...written. :S
Oh yeah...update soon ^_^Author's Response: Thank you vrey much and a 10/10 ? I love 10/10s ! lol I will update soon ! x Report Review
Really good, FirePearl. In your words, 10/10. Please update soon!!!!!Author's Response: Long time no talk, a 10/10 thank you ! I will update soon as soon as you do lol
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I really liked this. Sirius can be a git. What's Remus so mad about? Is it because Sirius asked her and she said yes or because she's been hanging out with Severus or both? I think Sevy is jealous. *giggles* update soon! Kiss Kiss ^_^ EMBRACE THE FREAKDOM!!!Author's Response: Remus is angry because of both and yep Serverus is a wee bit jealous. I will update soon ! Kiss Kiss ^_^
Oh and thank you for the review ! Report Review
Sirius can be an utter prick when he wants to. grr. lol. lovin' the story, although I think you should make Remus a bit nicer....he is the kind Marauder, after all. And what does he think about Sirius trying to get off with his sister? If one of my friends were snogging my little brother, I'd be more than a little grossed out. lol.
xxxxxAuthor's Response: Yep Sirius can be a prick when he wants to be lol thx yep Remus should be a bit nicer to his sister but in the end i think he just wants his sister to leave him and his friends alone. I hate it when my little bro trys to hang around with me and my m8s. LOL
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OMG! I just found this and i completely love it! By all means, continue . . . quickly! I'm glad she got her invitation! The ending of this chappy was a little confusing though. Did he hear her accept Sirius's invitation or was it like that she told him it was hardly a loss that she wouldn't see him as often. I think he's got a little crush on her! Please update soon because I love it now! Kiss Kiss ^_^ EMBRACE THE FREAKDOM!!!Author's Response: Lmao! Thank you, I'm on chapter 5 now so it won't be that long till the next update. Yes it was a little confusing, he went in a little stropy because she told him it was hardly a loss that she wouldn't see him as often. It was only a little joke though. LOL thank you for the review ! Won't be that long till the next update. Report Review
woop, an update. 10/10 love it :)Author's Response: : D Yay 10/10 ! *does a funny dance* Thank you ! ! ! Report Review
*raises an eyebrow* Hanging around with Snape, eh? Cool. And she is really good at potions...I never knew anyone could be so good at it...*shakes head* I think I would fail Potions myself. Anyway, I can't believe she isn't in the Slug Club yet...Author's Response: *raises yet another eyebrow* Yep brilliant at potions, i dont think hardly anyone is that good at potions i would fail too. Maybe soon she will get into it. Report Review
awww, she is the sister of a Marauder and yet she has no friends?? How can that be? Tsk tsk tsk....Author's Response: Yer it is kinda sad, she did have a friend remember Kim ? But im sure later on in the story she will make a couple. Report Review
*raises an eyebrow* Interesting, very interesting...she was able to have a civil conversation with Snape...the one person that Remus and his friends hate...yeah...that's shall be intersting to watch and such...Author's Response: *raises an eyebrow* I thank you for the review and yep it is interesting..... Report Review
"You're lucky that I’m so sympathetic towards intellectually disadvantaged people, such as yourself. If I didn’t feel sorry for you... Well, I wouldn’t be here to help you study,” he assured her.
"You're the git." Tahlia hit the boy in the shoulder again. They turned the corner and she curtly grazed his cheek with a kiss before he shoved her face away with both hands and scowled. "I should be tutoring you,” she scorned.
My goodness, FirePearl, you are a good writer. You mix romance and humor, something I'll never be able to do, in one installment! As you would say, 10/10!!!Author's Response: lmao, i thank you for your kindness, but i really do find your stories amazing cant wait for the next chapters !!!
lol, thanks for the review ! Report Review
ooooooooooooooo i'm sooo into it but why is renus such a jackass all or a sudden ya know he used to be nice lol ***********book mark*********Author's Response: lmao, when ever you read about Remus he is always with his sister and i guess he gets a bit weary i mean he is around Sirius a lot and we all know what Sirius is like near a lady don't we...
Oh nad thanks for the review ! Report Review
wow, i really like this story plz continue!Author's Response: Thank you ! The next chapter is out now. Oh and thanks for the review ! Report Review
I liked it. It would be kinda weird if Tahlia went out with Snape. remus 'protective older brother'thing would come out. can't wait for the next update!!!! Author's Response: Thank you! Yer it would be kinda weird if she did go out with Snape.....
I have just started chapter 4 so it wont be that long! Thanks for the review! Report Review
Really good, FirePearl. I give it five out of five stars!!!!!!!!!
(Oh, I have another story, Collide, which I think is better than You Were Meant for Me. Please check it out.)Author's Response: I thank you and i thank you again for the five out of five stars!
I'll just get on to reading your other story! Oh yes and thank you for your review! Report Review
interesting story...remus's sister getting along with severus...and hes not mad...dont see that in a story very often (atleast not the ones i read)...i like it^^Author's Response: Thank you! I like my storys to be differant you see i find it better that way. You would think hes not anger wouldn't you...mwhahaha oOo im evil ^_^ Report Review
mmhhmm!! =) I Author's Response: Haha glad you like it! Report Review
i really like this, its very entertaining. dunno why you dont have more reviews, you should.please update as soon as possible, i'll be waiting,lol.Author's Response: Thank you! Im on chapter 3 now and i'll let you on a little secret its going to be called Tractus Confuto. If you read chapter 3 you will catch my drift. Report Review
Awesome second addition, FirePearl! Author's Response: oooOooo i thank you! Im just on chapter 3 right now and its gunna be a shocker! Report Review
Awesome story. I thought this was going to be some sort of obligation after you posted on mine, but I was definitely wrong. I give it a top number, FirePearl. *Adds this story to my favorites*Author's Response: Aww i thank you not many people have looked at my story even review on it but you have made me day : D
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