Hi Ravensdaughter
well, interestin enough chappie.. i liked d way Rachel is adjustin well despite bein seperate from her frnds. n hmm I cud see d subtle hints which u gave regardin Fred.. i guess dey wud compliment each other dat is if dey get together or anythin. Anyways, very good chappie n i sure wud like 2 read more.. hope u update soon of course after d que opens. Gr8 job on all of ur chappies so far!
-Aashna
PS: Would u please be kind enhough to comment on my new story in the form of a review of course. I would really like to know ur thoughts abt it. The story is called 'A Tryst With Destiny'
Thank You.

Author's Response: Thanks for the reveiws. I'll look at your story. Love the title.
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Hi Ravensdaughter
well, dat was quite a turn.. i was assumin dat Rachel wud definitely b in Gryffindor but definitely d Ravenclaw turn was very very out of d blue. I hope her relationship wid Hermioen as best frnds sustains despite bein in 2 diff. houses.. Nonetheless, Gud chappie! I luk fwd 2 d next.
-Aashna

Author's Response: Yeah I'll explain that when Rachel gets to her third year.
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Hi Ravensdaughter
a lill short but another nice chappie.. i liked d way Fred and George helped Rachel n i cud see dat by Hermione's last line dat u r definitely makin a connection in synchronisation wid d events of d book.. very nice attempt indeed. Good job on dis n am on2 d next chappie!
-Aashna

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm trying to make this so it could of really happened and is just an different perspective on the original books to be honest. Thank you for the nice comments
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Hi Ravensdaughter
Hmm.. Racher is takin a lot after Harry.. as in u know confused abt d way n den askin 4 help from Mrs. Weasely. I liked d wa u r connectin d story from d books inspite of havin a new character.. d way Hermione went lookin 4 Trevor in d end definitely provided a nexus. So, overall, a good job!
-Aashna

Author's Response: Thanks for noting that. I'm trying to make her different. I'll see how it goes.
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Hi Ravensdaughter
good plot-line.. hmm.. a story solely abt friends is really intriguing.. The first chappie was nice.. i liked readin abt a new character- Rachel dat is. Sounded a bit like Harry u know proff. Mcgonagall comin n explanin thins n escortin her around. But, good one.. although, it was a lill short n umm a lil rushed up at some places. If u wud've described more, den, it wud've flared up even more better. Nonetheless, a gr8 job!
am on 2 d next.
-Aashna

Author's Response: Thanks for comenting. I'm probably going to edit this alot as a I go through the other chapters.
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