{reviewid: 1247058, reviewer: 'Potter_Lover2011'}
30th December 2006:
Why did you abandon this story it is very good
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{reviewid: 1220742, reviewer: 'James_Fan'}
7th December 2006:
This is so good. I think that u should continue. This story would be a really great story to read. Hope u continue.
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{reviewid: 1189854, reviewer: 'Saranwarp'}
9th November 2006:
I totally disagree with Anika R! I loved it. UPDATE SOON PLEASE! No presure O.o
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{reviewid: 1189674, reviewer: 'axelvaz'}
8th November 2006:
That was good.
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{reviewid: 1181881, reviewer: 'harry799'}
1st November 2006:
if this is is your first ffanfic and youve written at least 3 more then why arent you updateing??? this is really good!
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{reviewid: 1172772, reviewer: 'Rose_4Ever'}
23rd October 2006:
Its good, you should keep it goingm even if it is a one-shot!
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{reviewid: 1108216, reviewer: 'Infantasia'}
18th August 2006:
Hmm this was interesting :) I have to say, this was a little bit weird as a one-shot. It would've made an excellent first chapter to a story, but for a one-shot, it didn't seem...complete, so to speak. I recommend turning this into a story, if you have time, that is, and if you want to. I completely sympathize with Lily's gaping demeanor. A boy that she has hated all her life suddenly becomes her next door neighbor. Talk about a nice neighborhood eh? :) Anyway, I'll look forward to reading the rest of your stories.
P.S. Lily's last name is spelled Evans ;)
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{reviewid: 1071010, reviewer: 'FalconFeathers'}
21st July 2006:
Pic this story backup it is sooooo good
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{reviewid: 1068408, reviewer: 'HeyDude'}
19th July 2006:
Please!!!! PLEASE!!! Don't abandon the story i want to find out what is going to happen at dinner and between them over the summer!!!!!!!!
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{reviewid: 998353, reviewer: 't_angel_1993'}
24th May 2006:
:) it was cute, but why is James calling Lily "Evens"? isn't it "Evans"?
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{reviewid: 985266, reviewer: 'FalconFeathers'}
13th May 2006:
It's really good
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{reviewid: 983858, reviewer: 'ron%20rocks'}
11th May 2006:
why did you abandon it it's good so far i would lik to read more !!!!!!
Author's Response: I didn't think I would be able to finish it because I was being swamped with homework and stuff but since I know that people are still reading it, when I'm done with my other fanfic I 'll continue this one.=]
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{reviewid: 978861, reviewer: 'wolf2010'}
6th May 2006:
yay! good work! update soon
Author's Response: =]
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{reviewid: 976414, reviewer: 'DanRadcliffe57'}
3rd May 2006:
Hey nice so far keep writing it okay
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{reviewid: 967699, reviewer: 'DRHGforever'}
23rd April 2006:
Great story! I love the idea keep thoose chapters coming.
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{reviewid: 966736, reviewer: 'jameslover27'}
22nd April 2006:
love it! but evans is spelled with an a
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{reviewid: 960060, reviewer: 'LivingWonderStar9876'}
15th April 2006:
This was good, but you had a lot of misspeled words, like Evens(Evans) and Apperate (Apparate)
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{reviewid: 954850, reviewer: 'Sandra'}
9th April 2006:
This wasn't short at all! If u saw my first chapter you'd know short :) This was a enjoyable chapter 2 read. I rarely read fanfics about Lily and James, but I just thought I might as well read this. I always assumed that Lily and Petuania got along, before Lily found out she was a witch, but it makes perfect sense that they wouldn't, when i think about. Good chapter!
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{reviewid: 954719, reviewer: 'pippinsmcgee'}
9th April 2006:
I really like it! You are doing a wonderful job! Even though Evens is actually spelt Evans. hee hee. Anyway, keep it up! I can't wait!
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{reviewid: 953500, reviewer: 'CourtneyFaith'}
27th March 2006:
~Really Really Great Start. I love it.~
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{reviewid: 952282, reviewer: 'harrypottersangel'}
26th March 2006:
A little bit boring but I am positive that it will pick up the pace!
~K
Author's Response: Yeah I'm not very good at making it interesting on the first chapter. I'm hoping to make it better later on though.
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{reviewid: 951438, reviewer: 'Anika%20R'}
25th March 2006:
Pretty crappy story. I mean come on! Its completly unrealistic. YOU EVEN SPELLED EVANS WRONG! And also how the hell are you suppose to feel "safer" in a muggle town? Use your brain woman. If you even have one...
Author's Response: You make good points. Sorry about spelling Evans wrong. My bad.
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{reviewid: 950931, reviewer: 'AnnaLily78'}
25th March 2006:
Not bad, not bad at all... Update soon!
Author's Response: THanks. I'm trying to get the next one posted soon.
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