wow... this is great stuff. please continue, this is absolutely wonderful. I love how well it's written and how unexpectedly moving it is. I hope to see the rest of this soon.

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Ok, I just read it for the THIRD time damn you... why havn't you continued with this story? It is so obviously well written and you can tell that the storyline is going to take the reader somewhere interesting. Please carry on! I'm begging you! *on knees and grovelling*

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Hi. well that was the bestest storie in the whole entire world!! Hehehehehe lol lol. Hey Katie can I come over for a swim soon?? Happy New Year. P.S Your storie is really cool you should keep writing it!!! Definatly 10

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Your writing is incredibly crisp! It honestly nearly crackles with the emotions you are trying to convey. I could not help but flinch during the beating scene (and honestly, not prone to much flinching)...I read all three chapters and have been very impressed with the peek into Draco's mind and his world. There's some fantastic details added too, in particular when you are discussing the expectations of a Malfoy, dancing with stout wives and things...it was wonderful. A sort of "Etiquette for the Evil but Stil Well Bred" feeling to it....it was funny and appalling all at once. Sorry, I write incredibly long reviews: Great use of adjectives throughout everything I've read of yours. The words chosen really fit the moment and help bring it to life. Very well done.

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That was absolutely horrible! But REALLY good, LOL. Does that make sense? Yeah, it's perfectly fine, no need to worry about it and sorry i didn't say goodbye on msn, i was reading this and I thought you were just talking, so I ignored you :) yeah, 10/10

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hey katie, this is Hailey from ur school i was in ur drama group(i'm a year younger then u). i thought that was so good can u keep writing.

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hey all this is the author i was just going to say that come the next chapter of Pureblood to the End it will shifted to the Hermione/Draco romance part of the story. the relationship wont actually come in till sixth year or round there but i want it in that section anyway. please kept reviewing!

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hey i like this it has real potential

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Draco needs to be more in character. hes to mushy for my liking

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i think u need to work on the raltionship wif D and N . it seems kind of love/hate

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I loved the chapter of your story. I can't wait for more.

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Please change the "wat" in your author's notes to "what". They are distracting and do a great dis-service to the rest of your writing in the actual story, which is, in fact, very good. I do like how you protrayed the relationship between Draco and his mother. Somehow I do expect that she'd be the one who truly loves him and likewise, as hinted in GoF.

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