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Review #1, by Wizardwannabe silent

10th March 2007:
Strange but I like it, strange still tho

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Review #2, by Jellyman silent

6th May 2006:
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Author's Response: thankssss

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Review #3, by O Crazy One silent

20th April 2006:
Hi!!! I think this has some great potential! You might want to explain a bit more and check capitalization, as well as grammer. You had 'two' in Poseidon's letter to Lily and Sirius instead of 'to.' I was also a bit confused on the part about Iraq for a while. You might want to put in when you change time. I really do like this though! If you fix those easy little things than it will be perfect! Sorry if I seem negative, but I'm really not. I'm just an English geek and I try to do things as close to by the book that they can be! (LOL) I will be checking for updates! Kiss Kiss ^_^ EMBRACE THE FREAKDOM!!!

Author's Response: Thanks!
I am so glad you reviwed
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Review #4, by TomBrady12 silent

27th March 2006:
Hey hey hey. Try to explain a bit more. That Iraq thing was a bit confusing. And you should elaborate more about Poseidon and Lily and Sirus' relation.

Author's Response: oh sorry...hehehe i got a bit carried away did'nt i in the next chapter i will explain more i promise thanks for the review it was my first on this story!!!!

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