that was very good. at first i thought i wouldn't like this story because im about the harry/ginny relationship, but it was surprisingly well written and i enjoyed reading it. good job. :)

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O.o

To be honest its a bit lame! The storyline is good, BUT, you need to write longer sentences and paragrpahs not just. Harry opened the door. He waved at Hermione. She got up. She went to him. They had a kiss!

It gets a bit boring

Tryu writing like: "Slowly, Harry opened the door, with a big grin on his face, and waved at Hermione, his new wife. She jumped up and ran into his arms, pulling him close and giving him a passionate kiss. That moment, Harry felt like everything was ok, and that he would be with Hermione for the rest of his life"

O.o


Author's Response: Yeah, I know. I don't like this story much either...Which is why it's discontinued...thanks, I guess. =)

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I love this story please please please please please write more.

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Whoa people calm down. Its just a chapter. All the other reviews are peeps freaking out over who objected. Its just a fanfiction. Just a fanfiction.

Author's Response: Gee Katie thanx. Love ya

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Gabby you dum-dum! You made 4 chapters of that story involving Harry/Hermione's daugter Katherine ( by the way thanks for naming her after me :) Yay!) and it still has zero chapters! Post the 4 woman!

Author's Response: But that's a sequel Katie! I'm not done with the first one!!! Plus I wrote Chapters two to four. I never wrote chapter one..maybe if I write chapter one I'll post on Loves Aftermath. And it's not ONLY Katherine, it's David too! Oh and did I tell you that David M. (ya know the real one that we thought went goth and that we WERE really close with) his girlfriend is a BITCH! OMG! And I told him that and he's like "I don't really care, Gabby." :( Oh well he sux!

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Update!!! FAST!!! Chop Chop, get to it!!

Author's Response: I'm trying I'm Trying!!!!

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HEY! Dont take all the credit that you made dean the Objectee! I told you to do that. The orignal was Blaise to win Pansy back from Malfoy. But why do it at someother persons wedding. Plus Gabby you should have made it like
Ginny: Dean I used to love you but I love Neville!
Then make a sequel which is like that Ghost Whisperes episode where Dean comes back after he is dead and tries to kill Ginny but neville saves her. Gory and Scary i know but it is almost october and i am just getting in the mood for Halloween
- From Little Dead Riding Hood. aka Katie

Author's Response: I never took all the credit for making Dean the objectee! That was all your idea! NO! Ginny NEVER loved Dean you weirdo. Or maybe she did. Well your the Harry Potter expert! And in the sequel I am not doing that! Gosh. I still think that your Halloween costume is weird. I don't know what I'm being yet but I have balck lipstick for no apparent reason. I'LL CALL YOU!! Love ya,
H_Hshipper
Can you stop calling me Gabby? You know I hate it when you do that but you are my best friend so I guess it's okay.

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Oh my i was just on my mac and i felt like reading Bill/Fluer fanfiction and whos story do I see??? YOURS!!! tee hee. Just did that to tell you.
************Katie Moore***************
P.S. If you are a reviewer person dont copy this. I am the best friend of the writer so i can write completly idiotic reviews.

Author's Response: Okay! And yes you sre my best friend. What happened to your real penname anyway?

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way too short!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i know my story is short but this chapter should have been longer. other than that it was great!
lurves
li
10/10
;)
p.s.
thanks for saving my life by updating!


Author's Response: Hee hee hee. You're welcome!!!

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Oh. My. God. DEAN!????!! Totally not expecting that. Good job!

Author's Response: I don't think anyone was expecting Dean. Thank you!

~H_Hshipper

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the begining made me smile..... couldn't help it...but the chapter was kind of short.

Author's Response: hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee

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the begining made me smile..... couldn't help it...but the chapter was kind of short.

Author's Response: Yeah it was wasn't it? Glad it made you smile though!

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Hey this is really good...but luna's mom died. Or are you just like not having that be included in the story for later chapters or something?


Author's Response: In chapter two I forgot about that but in chapter three I added it.



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YEY!!! I like those names also I love your diary update soon yey for Ginny and Neville

Author's Response: My diary? Huh I think I have to reread this chapter for myself....Yeah! Yeah for Ginny and Neville!



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YEY!!! I like those names also I love your diary update soon yey for Ginny and Neville

Author's Response: Thanx!

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NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHY WOULD U END THE BLOODY CHAPTER THERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OHMYGOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THE WORLD IS ENDING!!!!!!!!! I CAN SEE MY LIFE FLASHING BEFORE MY EYES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
lurves
li
great story bye the way.
p.s.
crasage is corsage.

Author's Response: Thank you! I put in the next chapter like two weeks ago...and they still haven't validated it!!!! Urgh it's annoying.

-H_Hshipper

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you have been informed by me!!! mwaz!! Oh by the way Gabby i got the internet back! Huzzah!! very good chapter. And didnt I tell you a good first dance song? You know the song. I know you do.

*****************Katie************************

Author's Response: I'm not using that song! It's freaky!
Luv ya,
Gabrielle
P.S.You figured out your password!

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you should make it twins a boy and a girl

Author's Response: Hee hee already did. Woops. I told.



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woaaaaaaaaaa

Author's Response: I knnnnnnoooooowww!!



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Omigod! I hate the cliffy but love it at the same time! Really good!

Author's Response: Thanks yas!!



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hey i saw your name and i realised u shipped harry/hermione like me! for starters, YAY FOR HARRY/HERMIONE there arent enough shippers around and its true that they wont get together in the books (jk said so) but anyways enough ranting...great fic! u can slow down the general pace of the story though, and take some time with your descriptions but apart from that, UPDATE SOON! lol n keep up the great fic writing :)
ps check out my fic, its H/Hr as well!

Author's Response: Thanks and I'm gonna read your story soon. I saw your gallery on the dark arts by the way...It was cool!

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OK, I've seen this on the lists a few times, and thought I'd give it a try. Your premise I like (having all these weddings within a short time), and your pairings I like as well. I ship H/Hr too, and I do that with my stories as well (even trying to work a Book 7 with a believable H/Hr).

Anyways, your beginning is alright. It jumps right in I found, which is alright, but slowing it down a little I think would be nice. A friendly Draco and Pansy, I admit, I find strange. I understand things are different, but he still killed Dumbledore. I would expect Harry to stay pretty mad at Draco, just waiting to curse him at sight. Plus it's just in Draco's character to be snide and contemptuous.

Anyways, I've gone on long enough. It is your first fiction, but I just think slowing it down, explaining a little more, and maybe a little more detail in things (ie. saying "they kissed" works alright, but using a more descriptive way of doing it makes a story come alive, and draws in your readers), I think you'll be on a great road for future stories. Again, not a bad start, now let's see where it goes!

Author's Response: Woah! That might be longest review I've ever gotten. Thanx for the constructive critism. But Draco didn't kill Dumbledore, Snape did. Thanks again.



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nooooo! i want to know what happenes!!!!!


Author's Response: Everyone Does.

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its draco... and i thought i said this before, but Never Had a Dream Come True by S Club 7 is a very good song, for a first dance song.

Author's Response: I know! I'm gonna use it! And it MIGHT be Draco.

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What the Heck? I need to know who said that!!!!

Great chapter, by the way.

Author's Response: Thank you! I was writing the next chapter and it said I wasn't logged in. How on earth could I write it if I wasn't logged in then? AAAAAAAAHHHHH!


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