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Review #1, by hpotter_is_hotter My Baby

8th August 2006:
cute...is there gonna b more chapters or is that the end?

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Review #2, by newgurl88 My Baby

27th March 2006:
really cool, i liked it

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Review #3, by x My Baby

25th March 2006:
ummmmm

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Review #4, by maggiedalena My Baby

25th March 2006:
Cute!!!!!!!!!! I love the title as well as the story........'My Baby' ...lol

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Review #5, by PrincessPotter My Baby

24th March 2006:
Hey anglia, this is a good start, although you have some spacing issues and i didn't really understand the end when he was busting the door in. How did he hit her shoulder? Wasn't he hitting the door? I liked how you used the boyfriend to make Ron jealous... really cute. Overall I feel like you could expand the whole thing a little, using more description to really set the scene. :)

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