Aww! That was so sweet! I LOVED the ending! Brilliant. The rest was pretty good. Very funny!! Good job!!

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Lils, I can almost be certain that he will ask. The almost comes from the idea that Sirius might try to get to him and tell him some kind of silly "plan" to fix the situation, which means he will stop asking her out.

...

That's gonna happen isn't it?

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Good way to start. I shall continue to the next chapter!

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oh i love your story you need to continue it i love the way lily already loved james i love james cousin it's an al-round great story!

Author's Response: Thanks :)

I'm hopefully going to update within the next week or so.

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I love this story!!! Are you writing more chapters?

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well that last chapter was pprreetyy darn good.
in fact the whole story was pprreetyy darn good.
i'm going to reccomend it to all my james/lily loving
friends.

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Oh! Plz write more soon! Im dying here! This chapter was funny! 10/10

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Loved ch 2 now hopefuly i can rd ch3. Bye. 10/10

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Oh wow! For some reason im gettign de'ja'vu right now. The letter . I wonder if i read this before? Oh well. I LOVED it! I want to read the next few chappies but i have to get off the computer so i can't. Darn! Ok Plz update soon anyways and if you get a chance could you plz check out my story "Last Christmas" Its my first fanfic. I need ideas for my third chapter. Ok bye. 10/10

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OMG!!! This was totally sweet and I absolutely loved it! I don't really have time for a long review, I'm sorry. But I thought I'd leave a little tid bit! It was really funny at times like when Sirius was playing with her hair! I loved it! Update soon! Kiss Kiss ^_^ EMBRACE THE FREAKDOM!!!

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This is really good! That's all I've got to say. Skriv mer!

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omg!!!! i love it!!!!!!!!
u MUST continue!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks, I intend to...!

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UPDATE!!! I LOVE YOUR STORY!

Author's Response: Thank you very much to all the reviewers. This is the first fanfic I've actually posted. I've being writing it for a while but just never had the confidence to post. Glad people actually like it. Chapter 3 should be up pretty soon, I've sent it to my beta so when she's done checking it I'll post it.

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Hi!!! I know that this is my first review, but i just found this fic! It's really good so far! I'm definately going to keep checking on it for updates! I'm usually pretty good about leaving reviews and reading within a few days of an update and if I don't I usually give an explaination, so that's a little about my habbits. I literally shrieked when she said she was going to say yes. That was so exciting for me! She can learn to be nice to him, it just takes time! I've G2G! Update really soon! Kiss Kiss ^_^ EMBRACE THE FREAKDOM!!!

Author's Response: You're review made me smile! Glad someone can get excited about my work! :)

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love it!

Author's Response: Thanks! :)

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Keep up the good work! i just love the marauders i cant wait to see what they come up with. please continue

Author's Response: Chapter 3 should be up pretty soon, I've sent it to my beta so when she's finished checking it I'll post it.

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i love it so far. i love lily and james fics

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

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very good people portraying that you have done! please write more! sorry about the last review i had to much sugar in the four cupcakes that I ate. please Update soon!

Author's Response: Lol, i completely understand. Sugar is fun!

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That was great I cant wait to read more! Dude im dancing in my knickers ... only a little antsy! tally hoe good friend off to read the next chapter!

Author's Response: lol :)

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This is good. Keep it up.

Author's Response: Thanks, i intend to :)

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well i must admit, it was quite alot better than some i've read, very good details, and very good at forming charactors. if you ever write a book i'll be sure to read it.

Author's Response: Wow, thanks. Glad all you guys like it, starting to feel quite proud lol!

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omg you've got to update soon i absolutly love this story

Author's Response: ta! Gonna try and update tonight.

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I hope you'll continue your story, because I've finished to read the chapters you've made, and I hope that you'll have some ideas soon ... It seems pretty good.

Author's Response: Yes i will continue it, i'm hoping to keep it going so it will possibly quite long. Stick with it.

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i like

Author's Response: ta!

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This is really really good. I like the way you write this story.You're doing a great job. Keep up the good work. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the support.

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