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Review #1, by ohhhdear The Adventure Begins

23rd March 2006:
Really cool premise and start to your tale! Could you please use a spell checker, though? And maybe an editor would enjoy reading this too? I'm hoping you'll let us know why Elly didn't get her letter from Hogwarts when she was 11 if she is so truly "gifted"!

Author's Response: Thanks for the advice but I'm sorry to say that I'd like to keep writing the story the way I had planned to and sorry about the first few mistakes but i wrote both of those chapters at midnight or later so I'm sorry if you don't like my story that's your problem. <3 ~*Carley*~

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