{reviewid: 1884758, reviewer: 'Aine'}
3rd April 2008:
Aww, it's so cute!! I was bored today so I decided to read stories, and I really like yours. It would be nice to know what would happen if things had been different, so please don't stop writing :)
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{reviewid: 1870692, reviewer: 'LillyFlower13'}
20th March 2008:
good chapter. This isn't a critic but this isn't exactly a one-shot. good though!
Author's Response: haha yeah, i know.
i have received this message before and i am also aware of it... i have NO IDEA why it says that!when i started writing this story i said short story and when i noticed it said one shot i tried to change it but for some reason it wont let me! i have tried on multiple occasions to change it and i just gave up because i figured it wasnt thaaaat big of a deal!
thanks for your review tho:)
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{reviewid: 1868329, reviewer: 'arianna'}
18th March 2008:
Oh Come on...!?!?! You have stopped writing I want to see the ">>" little arrow thigy next to the chapter box...!!! very good I do like this story ...gotta love that random story button!!!
Author's Response: i find it very funny to get this review now!
i submitted my next chapter on sunday and i am simply waiting for the validation!
thanks for the review!!:)
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{reviewid: 1633344, reviewer: '411Kingsley'}
16th September 2007:
Good concept I cannot wait to read your future chapters. Are you getting to Harry at Hogwarts? Would he have been friends with Ron or as part of a wealthy world, would his natural friend been Draco.
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{reviewid: 1633329, reviewer: 'pottyandweezlbe89'}
16th September 2007:
love it cant wait for more 10-10
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{reviewid: 1632530, reviewer: 'BeautyLoonyKeeper'}
16th September 2007:
Interesting but the chapters are awfully short. Also, the paragraphs are long...too long. I dunno, if ya kinda broke up the monotony a little by breaking up the really long dialogs. Otherwise, very funny and not to mention entertaining.
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{reviewid: 1632512, reviewer: 'Luna65'}
16th September 2007:
Please write more
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{reviewid: 1381938, reviewer: 'Muggle394'}
16th April 2007:
harry is so cute. i can compare him to Liam (my friends baby brother). hes a little prankster too.
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{reviewid: 1381931, reviewer: 'Muggle394'}
16th April 2007:
im realy not good with reveiws but...that was cute. i like the 'man to man' converstion.
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{reviewid: 1381921, reviewer: 'Muggle394'}
16th April 2007:
cute.*10/10*
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{reviewid: 1381914, reviewer: 'Muggle394'}
16th April 2007:
good but why s it in bold??
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{reviewid: 1198577, reviewer: 'padzy%20%2Apadfoot%2A'}
17th November 2006:
awesome story! i'm glad their alive... maybe i lil' more drama though! lolz! 10/10!
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{reviewid: 1148091, reviewer: 'lizzieJ02'}
27th September 2006:
It is good so far. It is moving a little slow, but I definitely want you to continue. You don'f find very many stories where James and Lily live, so it is nice to find one. Update soon.
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{reviewid: 1148090, reviewer: 'lizzieJ02'}
27th September 2006:
It is good so far. It is moving a little slow, but I definitely want you to continue. You don'f find very many stories where James and Lily live, so it is nice to find one. Update soon.
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{reviewid: 1134388, reviewer: 'Flower123'}
11th September 2006:
so the ogbottoms are dead and harry lily and james are now staying in the castle.But for how long?and how will it change with neville not there?update sooon
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{reviewid: 1130741, reviewer: 'fleurdelacour__26'}
7th September 2006:
very cool. glad to see you updated! :) anyways nice chapter, looking out for the next one sometime soon...:)
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{reviewid: 1042907, reviewer: 'Professor%20Potter'}
29th June 2006:
okay, your thing says it's a one-shot, but guess what? a one shot is a single-scene story! you should change it to "Short story" or "Novella" or "Novel" depending on how long it is going to be
Author's Response: i know it does... and i really dont know why because when i started writing it i classified it as short story... i was confused when i found it saying one-shot so i tried changing it but it wont let me..... i have changed it many many times but it always ends up saying one-shot so i kinda gave up on it lol
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{reviewid: 970380, reviewer: 'kandy'}
26th April 2006:
I like the story its really good!BUt what is james going to do with the pranks?UPDATE SOON
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{reviewid: 966344, reviewer: 'fleurdelacour__26'}
22nd April 2006:
loving your story, keep updating !!
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{reviewid: 965372, reviewer: 'Jaime'}
21st April 2006:
Hey this story is really good! Some of the Lily/James stories where they live are really corny and such, but this one looks like it's shaping up to be awesome! Update!!!!
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{reviewid: 965198, reviewer: 'Estelle'}
20th April 2006:
That's very good ! And how you've finished this chapter ... That's very cute ! James holding Lily tight ... I liked it. =)
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{reviewid: 965172, reviewer: 'ronandhermionie_4ever'}
20th April 2006:
cool
r u gonna write sum more?????
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{reviewid: 964059, reviewer: 'kandy'}
19th April 2006:
AWWW this is a cutesy chapter YAY UPDATE SOON
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{reviewid: 955099, reviewer: 'Black%20Lilys'}
9th April 2006:
Hello! I really like the idea of where this is going and can't wait to find out how Harry grows up! I think you're doing well so far, but if you need any help let me know! P.S.- thanks for reading n reviewing my stuff!
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{reviewid: 954565, reviewer: 'padfoots%20girl%2032'}
9th April 2006:
amazing story please do update soon.
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