There better be a plot twist like she's secretly working for Dumbledore or I'll lose a few screws, that's one thing I can't handle, people following a sick man like Voldemort. Kidding. I really enjoyed this and pretty keen to read the sequel. :)

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sorry about that last review - I hadn't read the whole thing. ^^

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uhhh technically, wouldn't she be Harry's half-sister?

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Hey! I LOVE your whole story! Like ALL of it. Literally. I'm sorry for not reviewing all of the chapters but I dont do that with anyones. BTW. I TOTALLY think you should do a 7th year. I know Im a bit late at telling you that. but still. Lol.

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OMG your the best author ever and i thought i was reading a real HP book. You could so be the next JK Rowling!
I loved every bit of it :)

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Interesting idea and thanks for writing.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading!

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really like it nut the gig to see the all american rejects. Dont get me wrong i love the all american rejects but coludnt u have given her a private show or something.
also ia the ahracter Ava got anyhting to do with angels and airwaves

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Ava has nothing to do with Angels and Airwaves... never heard of it while writing the stories and still kinda unsure of what it is... lol... too lazy to google

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really good story. i like the kali chracter

Author's Response: Thanks.. I really love her too

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well.
was voldemort right?!?!?!?!?!
whos side is the real truth fule side?
well i realy actualy dont care im just bored.
;)

Author's Response: Muah haha... read and find out!

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wow.
wasnt expectin' that!

Author's Response: Thanks a lot!

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you should make 2 chapters!


Author's Response: U mean stories?? lol... I did!

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whats an Ermist?
and were did you get the idea for that?

Author's Response: I got the idea from thinking of a Empath. And I kinda just hit a bunch of keys on my keyboard... and when that didn't work I just started to play with the word empath and ermist is what I came up with. Because an ermist is like an empath. An empath can feel others emotions, while an ermist can feel other inner powers: good vs bad, strong vs weak.

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well.that wuz like most chapters ive read

Author's Response: Not sure if that's good or bad... but thanks for the review anyways!

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thats realy sad that her mom died='(
and since when was snape married and have a kid!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
but otherwise good so far

Author's Response: Lol... I wanted to show there is more to Snape then that greasy hair and crooked nose and mean demeanor. And that is why I wrote this story.

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hahahahahahahahahahahaha
harry potter and and snape's dayghter rhyme!
that is so funny and cool!
(roflol)
jk its realy not that funny but it is cool!
oh and the storys awsome and it rocks!

Author's Response: Lol... i never really noticed that before... haha... thanks for the review!

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can't believe i am thinking this but poor Snape. I guess it's becuse of how you write his character and portray him. Good job!!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

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OMG! Great story so far it's awesome!!

Author's Response: Thanks a lot!!!

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WICKED AWESOME! Please get the sequel up soon, I can't wait to continue reading.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading!

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AWESOME.

sequel soon plzzz

Author's Response: Aww... thanks so much... it is already up!!

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Just a question. I have lost a story from my favorites and am looking for it.
In the story Harry sings Rage against the machine. Is this one of yours?


Author's Response: Nope... never heard of it

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Wow, cool story! I love it as much as your other ones. Voldemort truly is a manipulative monster isn't he? I'm so curious whether he can trap Harry too through Kali. I'll go and read your sequel, hopefully it's as good as this story!

Author's Response: Aww thanks so much!!!!!

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i loved it but it sucks you had to kill off kali's mom so early!

Author's Response: Aww... yeah I know... but I had to show ppl why Snape is so bitter

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OK this is "cute" and "sad" but wayy out of character for Snape. Sorry. Don't get me wrong though, it would be a fantastic story except for the fact that Snape is just... not... like that XDD

Author's Response: lol... yes I know... Snape is very OC... next chapter should be up this time tomorrow

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It's nice seeing Snape as a caring father! I loved it. :)

Author's Response: lol.. thanks... i love it too... makes him all soft and lovable.. hehe

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that was kinda freaky, Volde bein nice to her and all, but i'm sure you have a reason

Author's Response: Oh yes... there is a reason for everything i do... lol

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