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4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Brie Ron's temper

10th April 2006:
Love the story!!!!

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Review #2, by Anti-Hedgewick The birds and the bees

27th April 2005:

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Review #3, by MrNoone Ron's temper

19th June 2004:
I've just read your story, and I think it's great. But you have made a few mistakes, here they are: 1) Harry's bird is named Hedwig. 2) I think Petunia is being too friendly towards Harry. 3) When you take the Knight Bus, you have to use Lumos, and Harry isn't allowed to use magic, so he can't get the Knight Bus to stop. 4) I don't think Harry would choose Cho over Hermione. I mean, they have been friends since their 1st year, so I don't think they would being friends because of Cho. 5) When you say that Ron hasn't got an O.W.L. in Potions, I realised you haven't said how many they have gotten each. 6) Who is the new Gryffindor Quidditch Captain? 7) I don't think Harry would run away, if Hermione was bleeding. Also, I don't think Cho would laugh at her.. Again, I think it's a great story, keep writng. Your friend, -MrNoone

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Review #4, by Hermione14 The birds and the bees

1st February 2004:
hey! your storys great! just that you spelt hedwig "Hedgwick" or how eva ya spelt it. but mayb dats how u spell it where u like i dunno! Anyway gd story ill read more now! if u av time could u plz r/r my fics under author name Hermione14 thnx!

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