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Review #1, by cedric_diggorys_girl Marshmallows

14th January 2010:
please post another chappie, and another and another... (you get the idea...)

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Review #2, by Brigitte Malfoy Wood Marshmallows

1st October 2009:
I'm reviewing after I've read the story so far. It's really good and I like where you are going with it. There are a few gramatical errors, I advise you to read over it to see if you want to change/adjust/edit any things. The story is great and I think you have captured Draco and Ron's characters very well. Hermione only slightly underdone and everything else is allright. this isin my favourites! Well done! I love how you write and it reminds me of how I used to right (except your way is much more mature!). Only really one point I want to bring out is with the notes, when they called each other names like that the first time they wrote to each other, it seemed a little to early for them to be calling each other as such. But I LOVE the scene where Draco is in her room seeing if she's ok once she's screamed and had that nightmare. HOT! I wish it was me. 8.5/10!!!

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Review #3, by marjorie Marshmallows

21st February 2009:
This is REALLY good!! You should write like this more often!!
You would make a really great book writer one day!!

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Review #4, by Quidditch Chick 01 Marshmallows

25th October 2007:
Why in the world were there marshmallows in her room? I bet the stalker is Terry.

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Review #5, by Quidditch Chick 01 A single rose...

25th October 2007:
What is it?

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Review #6, by Quidditch Chick 01 Prejudiced

25th October 2007:
Who is talking to her?

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Review #7, by Quidditch Chick 01 Dreamt

25th October 2007:
Great chapter.

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Review #8, by Quidditch Chick 01 I wish my life was perfect...

25th October 2007:
I like the plot, it's really good.

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Review #9, by Quidditch Chick 01 Hermione Granger?!?

25th October 2007:
That was great!!!

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Review #10, by Quidditch Chick 01 A French Girl

25th October 2007:
Great plot so far!

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Review #11, by Lsort Marshmallows

8th August 2007:
yummy yummy marshmallows!
brill fic! can't wait for more!
update soon!!

lol x

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Review #12, by han han weasley Marshmallows

29th April 2007:
aw hurry up its a great story! :)

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Review #13, by nemchy A single rose...

27th February 2007:
I knew it was going to be Terry xD
Cliffy again!? Oh.so sad I am...why are the chapters so short and why is there only one more to go..=(
I think she saw flowers all over the room or something terrible...=/
secret admirer, I don't know...a clue? please???
and about summer...maybe she got involved with a guy and he did something bad to her? or her parents or something like that...=/
10/10 like always, nothing to criticize...
bye, nemchy xx
why, there is no 8th chapter, oh why, oh why? why is there only one left for me to read, oh why??? =( (this was supposed to be a song xD)

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Review #14, by nemchy Prejudiced

27th February 2007:
Great, I have to guess...Draco? or somebody else??? Ron himself? I won't guess, I'll just look at the next chapter...=P
10/10 I love cliffies but I guess I always go right to the next chapter so I don't need to think hard =).
bye, nemchy xx
hope there is 8th chapter coming soon =)

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Review #15, by nemchy Dreamt

27th February 2007:
Seems like someone’s got attracted
Who? Draco or Miss Sunshine? xD
If you don't get any of my reviews, this is probably because of my english, you see, it is bad xD. I'm Slovenian and I only learn english at school so don't get mad on me =P.
10/10 not really perfect but, I'm getting use to adding 10/10 for the end of my review =P.
to the next chapter...oh it's only 3 more to go...what is wrong, did you stop writing at 7, 'cause it's cool number?
whatever, we'll see what happens.
bye, nemchy xx


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Review #16, by nemchy I wish my life was perfect...

27th February 2007:
Wird both are doing the same thing, you could just copy and paste and change the names xD.

Once I was reading one story in the class and my friend looked at it and she something like this: Malfoy reading, and she said, are you reading a comedy. And it wasn't a comedy, it was dark and romance story but still I had a good reason to laugh in your story now at the sentence up there...
OMG! They really don't know about each other, that's a good thing, if only they could stay like this, no problems, just chating and writing, but it's not that perfect, right? She wants to meet him or she and then BLAST! all goes wrong. =(

Thanks for letting me go and read the fourth chapter so soon. =P
10/10 for your great inserting the title issue.
By3, nemchy xx

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Review #17, by nemchy Hermione Granger?!?

27th February 2007:
I really don't care what the title of the story is, it can come in the last chapter, just please don't ruin the story with adding a chapter about the title. I really love it so far, it is just so diffrent then the others I read so far, and believe me I read a lot of stories. =)

Keep on writing, can't wait to see the next chapter, OMG it's already validated xD. :going to read the third chapter:
And I didn't forgot this time => 10/10, great chapter. =P
nemchy xx

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Review #18, by nemchy Hermione Granger?!?

27th February 2007:
I really don't care what the title of the story is, it can come in the last chapter, just please don't ruin the story with adding a chapter about the title. I really love it so far, it is just so diffrent then the others I read so far, and believe me I read a lot of stories. =)

Keep on writing, can't wait to see the next chapter, OMG it's already validated xD. :going to read the third chapter:
And I didn't forgot this time => 10/10, great chapter. =P
nemchy xx

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Review #19, by nemchy A French Girl

27th February 2007:
Wow, you go girl. xD THis must be a comedy, I love the beginning is like you are making fun of us, readers. =P So what's coming next, let me see... ::going to read the second chapter::
Oh, I forgot, 10/10, it's just fabiolous =).
nemchy xx

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Review #20, by anonymous Dreamt

20th February 2007:
“You evil, foul, loathsome cockroach! totally from the movie

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Review #21, by GryffindorGirl153 Marshmallows

19th February 2007:
omg, i got so mad when i realized this was the last chapter. keep updating! this story is really good!

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Review #22, by GryffindorGirl153 I wish my life was perfect...

19th February 2007:
aw malfoy is sweet to hermione in the letters. loved it =]

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Review #23, by GryffindorGirl153 Hermione Granger?!?

19th February 2007:
he must be in total shock that Hermione was the french girl on the train. great chapter =D

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Review #24, by GryffindorGirl153 A French Girl

19th February 2007:
oh wow, that was hilarious. malfoy actually believed her? next chapter ^_^

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Review #25, by Emster013 Marshmallows

14th February 2007:
i like it so far

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