please post another chappie, and another and another... (you get the idea...) Report Review
I'm reviewing after I've read the story so far. It's really good and I like where you are going with it. There are a few gramatical errors, I advise you to read over it to see if you want to change/adjust/edit any things. The story is great and I think you have captured Draco and Ron's characters very well. Hermione only slightly underdone and everything else is allright. this isin my favourites! Well done! I love how you write and it reminds me of how I used to right (except your way is much more mature!). Only really one point I want to bring out is with the notes, when they called each other names like that the first time they wrote to each other, it seemed a little to early for them to be calling each other as such. But I LOVE the scene where Draco is in her room seeing if she's ok once she's screamed and had that nightmare. HOT! I wish it was me. 8.5/10!!! Report Review
This is REALLY good!! You should write like this more often!! You would make a really great book writer one day!! Report Review
Why in the world were there marshmallows in her room? I bet the stalker is Terry. Report Review
What is it? Report Review
Who is talking to her? Report Review
Great chapter. Report Review
I like the plot, it's really good. Report Review
That was great!!! Report Review
Great plot so far! Report Review
yummy yummy marshmallows! brill fic! can't wait for more! update soon!! lol x Report Review
aw hurry up its a great story! :) Report Review
I knew it was going to be Terry xD Cliffy again!? Oh.so sad I am...why are the chapters so short and why is there only one more to go..=( I think she saw flowers all over the room or something terrible...=/ secret admirer, I don't know...a clue? please??? and about summer...maybe she got involved with a guy and he did something bad to her? or her parents or something like that...=/ 10/10 like always, nothing to criticize... bye, nemchy xx why, there is no 8th chapter, oh why, oh why? why is there only one left for me to read, oh why??? =( (this was supposed to be a song xD) Report Review
Great, I have to guess...Draco? or somebody else??? Ron himself? I won't guess, I'll just look at the next chapter...=P 10/10 I love cliffies but I guess I always go right to the next chapter so I don't need to think hard =). bye, nemchy xx hope there is 8th chapter coming soon =) Report Review
Seems like someone’s got attracted Who? Draco or Miss Sunshine? xD If you don't get any of my reviews, this is probably because of my english, you see, it is bad xD. I'm Slovenian and I only learn english at school so don't get mad on me =P. 10/10 not really perfect but, I'm getting use to adding 10/10 for the end of my review =P. to the next chapter...oh it's only 3 more to go...what is wrong, did you stop writing at 7, 'cause it's cool number? whatever, we'll see what happens. bye, nemchy xx Report Review
Wird both are doing the same thing, you could just copy and paste and change the names xD. Once I was reading one story in the class and my friend looked at it and she something like this: Malfoy reading, and she said, are you reading a comedy. And it wasn't a comedy, it was dark and romance story but still I had a good reason to laugh in your story now at the sentence up there... OMG! They really don't know about each other, that's a good thing, if only they could stay like this, no problems, just chating and writing, but it's not that perfect, right? She wants to meet him or she and then BLAST! all goes wrong. =( Thanks for letting me go and read the fourth chapter so soon. =P 10/10 for your great inserting the title issue. By3, nemchy xx Report Review
I really don't care what the title of the story is, it can come in the last chapter, just please don't ruin the story with adding a chapter about the title. I really love it so far, it is just so diffrent then the others I read so far, and believe me I read a lot of stories. =) Keep on writing, can't wait to see the next chapter, OMG it's already validated xD. :going to read the third chapter: And I didn't forgot this time => 10/10, great chapter. =P nemchy xx Report Review
Wow, you go girl. xD THis must be a comedy, I love the beginning is like you are making fun of us, readers. =P So what's coming next, let me see... ::going to read the second chapter:: Oh, I forgot, 10/10, it's just fabiolous =). nemchy xx Report Review
“You evil, foul, loathsome cockroach! totally from the movie Report Review
omg, i got so mad when i realized this was the last chapter. keep updating! this story is really good! Report Review
aw malfoy is sweet to hermione in the letters. loved it =] Report Review
he must be in total shock that Hermione was the french girl on the train. great chapter =D Report Review
oh wow, that was hilarious. malfoy actually believed her? next chapter ^_^ Report Review
i like it so far Report Review
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