Please update soon. Its a wonderful story. I just noticed that all your stories are about a lesbian relationship between Hermione and Ginny. Its very interesting how you could make them so different!!
And I am also 13 and don't think that you are a bad writer!! Report Review
Please remeber to capitalize and use these marks "" to show when someone is talking it is less confusing that way. I love this story idea but I probaly won't come back to read it because I had a hard time reading it. I'm sorry to be so harsh it's just that if you fix it more people will probaly want to read it and like it alot more. And if you need anymore help just leave a review to one of my stories and I'll help!
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I'm not trying to be rude or anything but, WORK ON YOUR PUNCUATION FOR GODS SAKE!!! srry Report Review
love this one to i can connect to what Hermione is going trough Report Review
love this Report Review
this chapter is much better then the first you a good writer kiu! Report Review
it is ok, not horrible but not great Report Review
I hope you change your mind and write more chapters!
Could use a proofreader ;) Not to be critical. I loved the first two chapters.
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It seems like a very bizarre storyline, to be honest. The grammar needs serious checking, and you need to put in speech marks and better punctutation, becuase it's very difficult to read as a long line of prose. I think the story development is a bit rushed, so just take a bit of time to proof-read your work and develop the characters realistically.Author's Response: Thanks I will definitely update as soon as the site is back online. It will completely different but it will be along the same story line
It should be You're not your, everybody makes that mistake, anyway, have a nice day updating the story /hint...hint.../. ~LM~ Report Review
darling...its good, but spell check, ok? dont want people to underestimate ur intelligence, :PAuthor's Response: Thanks I know i have had problems typing lately Report Review
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