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Review #1, by Ollie Angels

24th March 2006:
awwwwwww. why wouldnt dumbledore not know something? thats ridiculous! he's all knowing! (still in denial about his death) and porr hermione, couldnt she at least have fought as they took her? she shouldve, give her some pride... ;'( sniff, its all so sad cuase she's lonely and harry should swap places with her so he can keep fighting voldemort....grrrrr stupid voldemort, wish he'd die. and harry's so stupid cause he trusted voldemort would fling aside his wand too. "lets fight like muggles" voldemort wants to get as far away as possible from anything muggle, thats why he's killing non pureblood people! oh well, good story otherwise though! and that banner's so cute! (on the other story)

Author's Response: Thanks. Hermione let them take her because she couldn't cope anymore and wanted to die. And Harry is just a naturally trusting person I guess!

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Review #2, by Ollie The White, White Room

24th March 2006:
oh gosh there's probably someone outside her door right now! ahh! anyway, im liking this story, isnt it interesting how we always think of the afterlife as really white and pure and wonderful? that first part was actually quite funny, good work. but waitaminnit!!!!! if dumbledore was a ghost how come we didn't see him already??? we shouldve! ah well, still a good chapter, but im feeling that hermione's left with all the burden now, she'll have to kill voldemort herself or something.....ee must read more!

Author's Response: lol. Dumbledore wasn't already a ghost, but it's just a little bizarre thing that will become more apparent later on in the story... Thanks for reviewing!

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Review #3, by nirvana_freak Angels

20th March 2006:
Wow! I am quite astonished! This was not what I was expecting what so ever. I really never thought that there was going to be such a twist so suddenly! But I liked it! I really did! Its better then what I did "expect" What I really enjoy is how you keep within character. The way that when Harry was talking with Dumbledore...I felt that it was a true conversation like in what you would read in the books. Very remarkable I find your story!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I really really truly appreciate this review!

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Review #4, by Lone Fairy The White, White Room

18th March 2006:
Cool, sounds interesting, I'm looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Thanks! Boy do you like reviewing me! lol! Thanks anyways!

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Review #5, by nirvana_freak The White, White Room

18th March 2006:
WoW!!! This had a good start. I liked the way that Harry got to see everyone. But I most definitely liked the little touch about Dumbledore. I am guessing you're going to make us think about that...arent you? lol But its weird with Hermione. I feel really bad for her! But anyway, this is an awesome story so far! I am quite excited for other future chapters!

Author's Response: Thanks! that's exactly what I was going for! (P.S. I love Nirvana too! lol)

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