that was so lovely. it was great.

Author's Response: thank you very much. it just decided to roll out of my fingers one very latenight/early morning. Glad you liked it.

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wow, i have never read a story like this before! its amazng hermione from the looks of the story is bi yes? and the other person who is it? i have no clue but i do like your story just try putting in whos point of view you are using okay?

Author's Response: Hermione isn't bi, but the person who's pov it is, is bi, and this person (let's say her name is Lola) is the focus - it's her pov the whole way through. I wrote this story at 3 am, and it was written straight in one chunk, and posted at 4.30 am. I meant it to be confusing, but i don't think it worked in the way i meant it to. sorry THanx heaps for reviewing!

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I really don't get what happens in the second part - do you change the point of view? Is it Hermione's? I'm really confused - first kissing a girl and then Harry. I just can't make sense of it. But your story is actually quite good, but the second half is just to unclear.

Author's Response: The person who's pov it is, is bi, and this person is the focus - it's her pov the whole way through. I wrote this story at 3 am, and it was written straight in one chunk, and posted at 4.30 am. I meant it to be confusing, but i don't think it worked in the way i meant it to. sorry Thanx for reviewing it, and i'm really glad you liked it! It's actually my first fan fiction, so i'm really proud of myself. lol

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Good story, but im confusesd. Who is telling the storie. First kissing a girl, and then a guy. Kinda confusing. Overall pretty good!

Author's Response: The person who's pov it is, is bi, and this person is the focus - it's her pov the whole way through. I wrote this story at 3 am, and it was written straight in one chunk, and posted at 4.30 am. I meant it to be confusing, but i don't think it worked in the way i meant it to. sorry Thanx for reviewing it, and i'm really glad you liked it! It's actually my first fan fiction, so i'm really proud of myself. lol

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