how come you cant finish the stories? i really liked were this one was going. it was good. Report Review
like i said in your other story.....WHY NOT?! it's good, really good! JUST FINISH IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Report Review
NNOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!! y rnt u gonna finish it????? y???!!!! *sobs* i just found this story man! noooo!!! *breaks into incoherent sobs and collapses in a ball o the floor* Report Review
Whoa! Wait a minute! You\'re not writing anymore? Tell me! I need to know why! This is good...don\'t stop...*sniffles* Report Review
pleaaassssssssseeeeeeeeeeee carrryyy onnnn!!!!!!!!! It\'s sooooooooooo cooooooooolllllllllll!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11 Report Review
aww cute! thanx for reading my fic! Oh and in the part where u said i thought they were still first years, the chapter before it i think, said they were fourth years so! but anyway thanx for reading it this story is really good! Report Review
HEY! Nice story! Leaves me thinkin...(that\'s good) keep writing, u\'r talented! Report Review
Hey, I think I\'m your first reviewer! Anyway, this story is really cool! Yeah, in my Lily/James fic I\'m going to have Lily like someone else WAY before she likes James, I think she may even go out with him... I like your fic because it is so realistic. A lot of other Lily/James fics have Lily and James automatically falling for each other in their first year. Another good one is the story of asparagus, they fight for years before they ever think of getting together. lol. This fic has a lot of potential. There\'s one thing you could do to make your fic better... WRITE MORE! sr Report Review
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