I like it! Expect for Hermione not really loving Harry and Harry leaving, but great work nonetheless. Report Review
Ok, it's the only story from u that I started to read and didn't finish, I don't intend to bechause of 2 reasons.
1. I hate the Ron/Hermione stuff and
2. I can't stand songfics.
But other than that I want to wish u luck on your writing, it's fabulous and I think if u like u could be a writer some day...
bye Report Review
cool, i like the idea, are you going to get them back together Report Review
thats good!!! I like it!!! good song!!! Report Review
Okay, reviewing for chapter 2 and 3 here. Maybe I'm just a sucker for sad stories, but this one is really getting to me...and as proof that you are writing it well, I normally don't like the Harry/Hermione pairing...but your story is making me actually care! You write very well, but I wanted to point out one particularly good image: when you wrote about the snow falling into Harry's black hair and contrasting sharply....Good, good, and may I just say GOOD work. It's hard to take an image in your head and make is accessible to readers...that so perfectly painted a picture in my mind, I could practically hear snow crunching underneath his feet. Well done! You are going to finish this...right? Please? Report Review
Good gravy! If that's your standard of 'not very good' I'd love to see the stuff you really think rocks! - Listen, I normally don't like songfics much because I seldom know the song....however, this really packed an emotional punch and I think it was very well written. Honestly...it's almost deceptively simplistic, starting out with seemingly few words ...but WHAM...there you are with the big emotional concepts and they WORK. It is is rare to be able to evoke an emotion with few words but every single one you've written ends up carrying emotional resonance with it. Wow. Keep this up. Off to read the next chapter....and yes, sorry, my reviews are hellaciously long. Good work!!! Report Review
This was great! I love this song btw, and I wrote a songfic on it too =) you are a very good writer. Report Review
[ reviewer squeals in delight ] ~~~~~
I LOVE THIS SONG !!!
I love it so much that the L/J fanfic im writing at the moment, is fully inspired by that song! ~~~
i've always got the song on repeat when i sit at my computer, only problem is that the computer makes the song stutter if u type too fast.
I was also hooked on that song *white flag* for ages and 3 doors down is definately a fave..........
The stuff that u've written is good too, emotion packed, cant wait for more.
It looks we've got the same taste in music - and if ur overly into that "be faithful" song or "shake ur tail fetha" or any of the "black eyed peas" songs.......its getting SCARY. Report Review
oooooooooo cool Report Review
hey its the quhtor here i just wnated to say that i might take me awhile but i have decided to continue the sonfic and that i have four songs lined up . :) Report Review
Awsome i love it Report Review
hey this was quite good keep it up Report Review
That was sad...but itr was a great story!!!!!!! I hope to read more to this stroy!!!!! Report Review
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