{reviewid: 1300359, reviewer: 'SBSL'}
9th February 2007:
kewl i like it ya kno all the usual stuff :-D
Author's Response: thanks
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{reviewid: 1220410, reviewer: 'ronsbiggestfan09'}
7th December 2006:
awee! that was so so cute. and very well written.
Author's Response: Thanks!
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{reviewid: 1219987, reviewer: 'wired2damoon'}
7th December 2006:
again another classic!! well done!!! ~wired2damoon~
Author's Response: Thanks so much
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{reviewid: 1052465, reviewer: 'Sudha53'}
7th July 2006:
i love it!! you have nice writing style, it's hard to come by
Author's Response: :)
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{reviewid: 1032425, reviewer: 'almost_witch'}
22nd June 2006:
aww yay that was so good! im entering this one too. i like it alot :)
Author's Response: thanks
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{reviewid: 994458, reviewer: 'Amanda'}
21st May 2006:
Awwww:)
Author's Response: Thanks
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{reviewid: 948892, reviewer: 'returning_maruaders'}
23rd March 2006:
Ah, that was beautifully written. I luuuuuuurrrrve the r/h ship and that was so sweet! great job!
Author's Response: glad you liked it :-) It's my favorite of my one shots.
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{reviewid: 946421, reviewer: 'padfootsgirlygirl'}
21st March 2006:
ahhhhh that was so sweet i think i feel a little tear in my eye.
that was a great story it really was
Author's Response: YAY! Thanks! Glad you liked it!
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{reviewid: 946024, reviewer: 'Seamusfan1'}
21st March 2006:
Oh, YAY! I really like this... you made great use of the quote in this challenge...
Just a quick note..."he wanted her their because he cared about her " their should be there...
Anyways I LOVED this story, it's such a nice HBP missing moment! I am an avid R/Hr and you made this so smooth! I agree wth you too...I think that they both love eachother, and always have.
Great job, keep writing, you're amazing!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it so much! And thanks for the correction. I really should get myself a beta because I miss little things like that all the time
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{reviewid: 945555, reviewer: 'Laura'}
20th March 2006:
that was a really cute and sweet story:)
Author's Response: Thanks :) Glad you liked it :)
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{reviewid: 945332, reviewer: 'PhoenixTailAndHolly'}
20th March 2006:
apart from the occasional odd grammar like: "She wrapped his arms around him and kissed him full on the lips kissed him with everything she had." the story was really good! An excellent entry for the challenge. I've written one too called "Field Trip Kisses"
Author's Response: I havn't gotten a chance to read the other ones yet, I can't wait though. I should have proof read it better, thanks for letting me know that some of my grammer is off :)
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{reviewid: 943026, reviewer: 'starving_artist722'}
19th March 2006:
This was a really sweet one. I'm glad it finally was validated. The dialouge was especially good...sorry if this review is a little funky sounding I'm not exactly all here today. Well, thanks for taking up the challenge, you did a really good job with it!
Author's Response: YAY! I'm glad I did justice to the challenge :)
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{reviewid: 942963, reviewer: 'Algebra_Geek5'}
19th March 2006:
*Adds to favorites* That was just about the cutest damn fic I've ever read. =D~~Emma~~
Author's Response: aww thanks :)
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{reviewid: 940679, reviewer: 'candy_shop'}
17th March 2006:
hmmm... 6/10
Author's Response: what does that even mean?
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{reviewid: 939960, reviewer: 'Kait%20Hobbit'}
16th March 2006:
Omgosh! I love this One Shot!!! I've seen a lot of these "Good-bye Kiss" one shots lately, skimmed through a few and this has to be my favorite! I loved the line when he told her he was terrifed of loosing her, this was just fantastic! Keep up the good stories, if they're all like this, I'm sure they'll be wonderful!~~Kait Hobbit
Author's Response: thanks kait, I'm glad you liked it. There probably are a zillion of them because of a challenge...I'm glad you liked it so much, it's my favorite of my one shots I think :)
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