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Review #1, by DUMBELDAVE Chapter 2~Memories

15th March 2006:
Still some spelling errors but a bit better, also the chapters should be longer if possible. Overall though it was better than the first ! Dumbeldave

Author's Response: Yeah im deff. making chapters llongger its bugging me how short they are thank you for the revie thought!

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Review #2, by DUMBELDAVE Chapter 1- the begging

15th March 2006:
Ok where do i start ? Ther were lots of spelling errors, you even misspelled Dumbledore(cardinal sin) the last paragragraph was a bit hard to understand but i think you must mean snape. The basic story line is good but just needs some work Dumbeladave

Author's Response: yeahh thanks i know i need some wrk im a horable speller when i am lazy ill try and improve! thanks!

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