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Review #1, by PrincessPotter The Dream

14th March 2006:
oh, i really like your beginning! The style is very clear and descriptive and if flowed really well, although a little short in my opinion - - so you must update soon... although did you mean to put it into the one-shot section? If you go in and edit it you can change the location so that more people will be able to find it and enjoy it like me. :)

Author's Response: Thank you... that means a lot coming from you. And thank you for calling the one-shot section to my attention. That was an accident and has been changed. I'm sorry I haven't updated, I've been very busy at work. But I posted the next chapter just a few minutes ago so it should be up soon! Thanx again, Princess

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