{reviewid: 1995080, reviewer: 'Liam%20R'}
25th November 2008:
That was very good.
There were alot of subtle references to the Harry Potter series. Well, maybe not subtle, but still.
Like Emma calling Liz a "freak" like Petunia did with Lily, and the white, female owl Liz buys.
I like this.
I never realised it's such an old story.
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{reviewid: 1995071, reviewer: 'Liam%20R'}
25th November 2008:
Woah.
I found this story totally by accident. I'm writing one I called "Without A Trace" and wanted to see if anyone else had used it. Anyway, I decided to check this out.
And oh my God!
I already love it.
I'm suspicious that Harry isn't actually dead, but I guess I'll have to read the other chapters.
I like!
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{reviewid: 1361401, reviewer: 'Forever_More'}
1st April 2007:
OMG, i love this story and im only at the 3rd chapter thats saying something :D. I like how you did it kinda like harry potter..but well not exactly..Can't wait to read all the other chapters and the other next generation stories :D
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{reviewid: 1254666, reviewer: 'ggaabbyy'}
5th January 2007:
great! I really loved it! 10/10
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{reviewid: 1253752, reviewer: 'ggaabbyy'}
4th January 2007:
great so far!!! 10/10
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{reviewid: 1104712, reviewer: 'evie%20sanders'}
15th August 2006:
I love this idea! It's so good!
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{reviewid: 1090000, reviewer: 'everdreams'}
3rd August 2006:
Excellent story!! Rateing 10/10. I would give you much more than that if it was possible. Great job.
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{reviewid: 1081816, reviewer: 'Ravenclaw_girl'}
29th July 2006:
i love it....is Harry dead :( ?
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{reviewid: 1034318, reviewer: 'soopersweet2005'}
23rd June 2006:
ITS DRACO! It is Draco, right? Its too obvious..the Dragon...Draco...pale pointed face...you forgot to call him the 'Amazing Bouncing Ferrit"He's a git and Snape's a bloody prat.
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{reviewid: 924676, reviewer: 'Leanne%20Chang'}
4th March 2006:
This story got me totally hooked. I'm really enjoying it so far and can't wait to read the sequels! Congradulations.
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{reviewid: 897466, reviewer: 'zonko%20zany%20zaps'}
11th February 2006:
good story but you need more on the mother and father
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{reviewid: 797578, reviewer: 'Cyan%20Green%20Zephyr'}
5th December 2005:
Thank you, I was worried you were gonna take Liz' experiences straight from HPSS but you didn't well done. Thanks Ran
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{reviewid: 797565, reviewer: 'Cyan%20Green%20Zephyr'}
5th December 2005:
I really liked the line "Keith Diercks was a sullen faced boy who tried to perk up when he heard who Liz was." It was a great line, and with a little embellishment, would have ensuredhe was never forgotten. Anyway, great work, this chapter is much stronger than the last, keep it up. Randall
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{reviewid: 797553, reviewer: 'Cyan%20Green%20Zephyr'}
5th December 2005:
For some reason the comment about Hagrid made me want to cry. I did feel the scene ont eh train was a bt awkward though. Still, solid, thanks, Rand
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{reviewid: 797536, reviewer: 'Cyan%20Green%20Zephyr'}
5th December 2005:
That was a very fun chapter, the reader was able to vicariously live the excitement of a young girl given a new place to explore. Very NIce, Thank you. Randall
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{reviewid: 797508, reviewer: 'Cyan%20Green%20Zephyr'}
5th December 2005:
The setting at the begging is soo beautiful, so well done, the imagery f hte wind and the trees. THe dialogue is a bit,.. well unsophisticated, but the girl is 11, an if you look at the potter books the same is true to some extent of them. Thanks for writting, Ran
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{reviewid: 777502, reviewer: 'Ruth'}
20th November 2005:
hey this is gr8. Off 2 read da sequel!
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{reviewid: 628481, reviewer: 'SilverShadow04'}
4th August 2005:
Cool I liked the story it was nice and now I'm going onto the sequeal!!
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{reviewid: 628467, reviewer: 'SilverShadow04'}
4th August 2005:
Yes I figured out who the dragon was that was easy and I also figured out the code before you reveled what it meant. I feel so smart. *eats virtual cookie*
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{reviewid: 628348, reviewer: 'SilverShadow04'}
4th August 2005:
Okay since you crave reviews here is a review very good. I'm very curious as to how Luna may possibly be alive hmm. But I'm still skeptical so I will have to read on and find out. Here is a virtual cookie.
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{reviewid: 627537, reviewer: 'SilverShadow04'}
4th August 2005:
Okay I've read up to chapter 6 so far sounds very good. I'll most likelycontinue to read tomorrow since its real late at night now.
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{reviewid: 600713, reviewer: 'Kailey%20%20Needham'}
| Review #22, by Kailey Needham | Sorting |
20th July 2005:
good sorting hat song
and i thought it was
sort of cool you have the name needham in your
fanfic
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{reviewid: 582788, reviewer: 'Midnight_Witch'}
7th July 2005:
Draco Malfoy!! he's such a git....good story!!!
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{reviewid: 574139, reviewer: 'prongs'}
2nd July 2005:
duz dragon=draco¿¿
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{reviewid: 574101, reviewer: 'prongs'}
| Review #25, by prongs | Luna |
2nd July 2005:
hmm.... interesting turn of events...
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