Love the story! Im so glad that Blaise proposed. It was really good! Bye!
-malfoydraco Report Review
great chapter!!! keep up the great work! Author's Response: I promise to...I always love to hear that my work is appreciated. Report Review
ooh, great chapter!! cant wait 2 read more!!Author's Response: Thanks a bunch for the review, I'm glad you like it. Report Review
great chapter!! when is the school gonna figure out her last name?Author's Response: You'll find out soon enough. Report Review
Wow, this was an awesome ending. Quite rushed and unexpected, but still so sweet!
~Alexa xoxoAuthor's Response: Thanks a bunch for the review, I'm glad you liked it Report Review
Cho seems so OOC! I liked her in the books, but she's such a Bee-otch now! This is pretty cute, though I must admit that reading four pages about dresses and their hidden zippers and built-in bras is not fun. You try it.
The story's pretty shveet so far, though! :o)
LexaAuthor's Response: Thanks a bunch, I know it's a bit weird, but I don't know. I just added it in for the heck of it. Report Review
First off, I'd like to say that I LOVE Twilight and New Moon (the sequel).
Now for the review:
Once again, WAY TOO MUCH ABOUT CLOTHES! I mean, I love shopping as mush as anyone else, and I go all the time. But I'm not interested in reading about a girl sewing clothes to make them sexy. Also, you're making Rayne to ba a tad slutty. Also, she's being quite mean keeping her sisterhood hidden from Hermione. Lastly, she really seems to like the sound of her own voice. Basically, when she was introduced by Prof. Macgonagal, she started yakkedy-yakking to the entire school, bragging about her brains, and being really wierd. She seems desperate.She's the girl I would imagine wearing too tight and too short shirts, blaring her bum crack out to everyone, and trying to tag along with the cool girls because she wants to be popular. Also, her behaviour makes her really vulnerable for guys to use her.
The story seems pretty good to me, but Rayne's just not a very likable character.Author's Response: Thanks for the review and I'm sorry if you don't like Rayne, but that is not how she is. She is actually a really sweet girl. As for the sisterhood thing, she just didn't want to tell hermione because of the story about their parents divorce. She was also only trying to help out Evelyn with her clothes. It wasn't bad. Besides the clothes she wears and the ones she made aren't at all slutty. They don't reveal anything. I'm sorry if your upset about this, but I didn't mean for anyone to think that she was a slut or hooker or anything. Because she's not. Report Review
Pretty sweet plot, but I think there's way too much drama! And the way Rayne told everyone more than they asked for - her mother's sexual history, people feeling her up. Oh, and the way you spent an entire paragraph describing the brand, style, color, etc of every article of clothing she was wearing? Yawn, so boring.
I like the story though, it's cute. Author's Response: Well I'm sorry for that, but I kind of like the way it came out, so I most likely won't change it. I will look at it, but I probably won't change it. Because most people tell me that I don't put in enough detail and I try to rectify that. Report Review
i believe this was the perfect endingAuthor's Response: Thanks a bunch for reviewing, I'm so glad you love the ending. Report Review
fantastic! LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!Author's Response: Thanks a bunch for reviewing. I'm glad you liked it. Report Review
I do like the story, but it's kind of unbelievable, I mean it moves it a very fast way, but its good, I mean i do the same thing in some of my stories, Author's Response: I know, but it's supposed to be a short story Report Review
yes u are correct about the R.o.R.
10/10Author's Response: Thanks Report Review
*Tear* So sad. Well written, 10/10!! xoxoAuthor's Response: Thanks a bunch Report Review
Well done those three! Tut tut. Good chappie!! xoxpAuthor's Response: Thanks a bunch Report Review
Awesome story. Love it. Author's Response: Thanks a bunch Report Review
OMG. Is there a sequel ?Author's Response: I'm not sure yet Report Review
Awwwh :(Author's Response: It's sad, I know Report Review
Oh! Great great chapter ! Sad that Rayne's not with Blaise but..still.. AWESOME.Author's Response: Thanks a bunch Report Review
Ahh excellent ... poor Rayne ! :(Author's Response: I know Report Review
“I told you never to say that again.” Cho snapped.
Sounds like Mean Girls ! Hahaha love it !Author's Response: DOesn't it Report Review
HA! I dare you to retaliate, Marietta!Author's Response: I double dar you, Marietta! Report Review
Hmmm abit far-fetched, wouldn't you say ? She'd KILL Rayne ? She's not a Death Eater..Author's Response: No, but she is capable Report Review
Oh dear. humph *wants to put a Bat Bogey Hex on Cho*Author's Response: Me first Report Review
Gr... Cho better not steal Armand..Author's Response: Oh! You never know Report Review
Haha ! Nice one ! Author's Response: I love it Report Review
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