oh I love this fic!
I'm not logged in ATM but i'm definately adding it to my faves! great fic! Report Review
It's good, but please, update soon! Report Review
he, he, he................. the way u named it reminds me of FULLMETAL ALCHEMIST. ur style is very unique........ like envy himslef is talking through tonks......... just a hunch.......... but will lust be the last chapter? it woulsd be a good idea to make it that.......... Report Review
Another excellent and short chapter! Tonks is so cute, though Remus is cuter… and so not old! Oh, just one question. You wrote about pride, why didn’t you concern the fact that most people hold on to it, which is a hindrance to their happiness. I mean, when a person is too proud to be happy, or to apologize, and so on. Just thought that the kind of pride you pictured is not actually a sin. In a greater quality maybe, but Tonks’s pride was not the sinful one. Think about it. Anyway, I liked the chapter nevertheless. I love those two. Oh, I wish you could write that Tonks/Remus sequel… :P Report Review
aaaaah cuteness! that is so sweet. molly was kinda harsh tho, ryt? you hair changes colour as you blush? sweet. write more pleeease!
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hurry up with the next chapter plz thank you! Report Review
AWW. This is really cute/funny/ a lot of girlie words, I love it. Report Review
good chapterAuthor's Response: Thank you much. Report Review
Well, if she's attracting THAT man, she has every reason to be proud, non? Great line: “It was true.” He sat down beside her. “You know, your hair changes color when you blush. It’s quite endearing, actually.” I don't know how she didn't crumble into the sin of lust right there and then in the sitting room, cousin be damned! Great chapter - can't wait to read the next! PalomaAuthor's Response: Thanks! : D Report Review
I love the idea and I love the writing : )
This couple has so much to offer.
Thanks for two beautiful chapters.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. : D Report Review
I like that word... chocoholic! So, I think I liked this chapter even more than the first! Well, maybe because I am addicted to chocolate as well and trying to quit... but failing miserably so far. I like it melted, I like it dark, even with pieces inside and that wonderful Toblerone can make me smile... Sorry, I deviated. I hope I will read the next chapter soon, this story is great, and you are writing it great... Have a nice day, and keep the chocolate at hand :) ~LM~Author's Response: Thanks for coming back. I'm glad you liked it! Report Review
Adorable, and worth the wait. Favorite line: "She wished she could cause that—" Heehee! Can't wait for the next! Have a good one. PalomaAuthor's Response: Thanks for coming back. Yes, I thought Tonks would become distracted like so. I mean, I would. Report Review
i though this was supposed 2 b remus/tonks?Author's Response: It's been fixed now. Sorry. Report Review
is the gluttony chapter part of a different story? it was great anyway...Author's Response: Yeah, a glitch with my anal computer. It's fixed now. I'm glad you liked it anyway. Check out Easy to see the rest of the story that goes with that chapter. Report Review
Oh no! Cute chapter, but from a different story. Can't wait to read the actual gluttony chapter - I have a sense that it will be a hoot! Take care. PalomaAuthor's Response: Thanks for being patient. Sorry. Report Review
aww, poor ron! and hermione to some extent, as well....lol. let's just say poor everyone. lol. update soon!Author's Response: Check out the actual gluttony chapter, a la Remus/Tonks. The other chapter was from Easy. Sorry. Report Review
I love the.... falliing on purpose just to be caught by him bit, and the envy of the teacup, etc. etc.... BeeAuthor's Response: Glad you liked it. : D Report Review
Oh, sorry, it seems that you made a mistake, because this obviously is Chapter 10 from your other story. I suggest you fix it and update the real Gluttony chapter, which I am impatiently waiting for... Sorry for the previous review, I haven't actually read your other story, so I did not recognize it at first. LMAuthor's Response: Sorry. Here it is. Report Review
Okay... I am a bit disappointed, really. I thought this story was abot Tonks and, well, Remus! Just like it sais in the title. Sorry, I don't mean to be unsupportive :( Good chapter, and interesting idea, we are all Gluttons, aren't we? So, I quess next chapter will be about... um... who? Update soon and have a nice day :) LMAuthor's Response: It is Tonks, Remus. I promise! Please look at the actual chapter. Sorry. Report Review
Ooh, I like this idea. Great start.. I'll be watching this story :)Author's Response: Good to know. Report Review
I like it, it's pretty funny!Author's Response: Yay! Thanks. Report Review
wow! i like it! this is a bit of a coincidence, cos me n my friends were just tlaking about the 7 deadly sins yesterday. And 'cos theres 7 of us, we all choose one. I'm envy! hehe. So this is kinda my chapter!! lol.
update soon, its realy good!
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I love it! I think we are all guilty for the seven sins when it comes to Remus!Author's Response: As am I. Report Review
Oh! I love it!!! It is so cool, and I want to be his teacup, too:P I cannot wait to read about the other sins, update soon. And this is it, this chapter is perfectly written and it made me think... about my own demons;) However, keep up the good job! Author's Response: Yes, I want to be his teacup as well. Thanks for the review! Report Review
This is such a great start! I can't wait to read the next. My favorite line has to be : "she began to envy the silliest things—his teacup, for being able to feel his big hands wrapped around it; his shirt, for being able to touch his scar-laced chest; his fork, for being able to touch his lips…" I'm still laughing at that one. We've all had our little obsessions, haven't we? We can forgive Tonks hers. I look forward to seeing where this is going - for some reason, I think the gluttony drabble is going to be hilarious, and the lust....well, let's just say the lust should be fun to read. Nice one! PalomaAuthor's Response: Gluttony is done, but I'm not sure if it's showing up yet. Lust will be near the end. : D Report Review
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