Aw, how sweet! They're back together! Lol, nicely done.
10/10Author's Response: It just had to end that way :) Thanks for reviewing the entire short story! Report Review
Aw, my two favourite characters - Lucius and Severus - being kinda friendly...lol!
This chapter was much better! Keep it up!
9/10Author's Response: What can I say? Putting two (of my favourite) Slytherins together doesn't mean cuddlyness but it doesn't have to mean all out warfare either. I should come up with more tete-a-tete between them...hmmm. Report Review
It was a bit confusing at first, but it sorted itself out a bit in the end. Good job, I look foreward to the next chapter. :)
8/10Author's Response: This was my very first story that I ever did. It took me awhile (as I assume it does for everyone) to get into my stride. So, first attempt; not the best and not the worst. Report Review
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