Good story so far, I like when Riddle's personality is changed Report Review
Dumbledor is such a dumbass, he is an asshole, and a motherfucking bastard. Gosch I hate him so. Report Review
Another shock and surprise, Dumbledore alive and well. Another 10/10 and must move on. Report Review
Another awesome chapter. I don't think that Harry and company is going to let this Mia thing go. Another 10/10 and to move on. Report Review
This story is so awesome. I can't believe that this is the first review you've had since 2007. Another 10/10 and must move on. Report Review
I wonder what this Riddle tradition is? You certainly know how to keep someone hooked and wanting to read more. 10/10 and to move on. Report Review
Will there be a resorting of sorts for Mia? I ask because it would really be unwise to keep her in Gryffindor. Another good chapter and 10/10. Must read on. Report Review
This is so weird, Hermione does'nt mind being Voldemorts daughter. Another 10/10 and I must move on and continue reading. Report Review
Well that was a surprise, Hermione Voldemort's daughter. 10/10 for this start and I must read on. Report Review
u posted chapter 17 twice Report Review
I SOOO LOVED YOUR FANFIC EVENTHOUGH THE GOOD GUYS WERE EVIL LOL AWSOME Report Review
aww this was a great story! i felt some was rushed but the story line was great, i loved it! poor thomas tho, dumbledores an evil bastard for killing a baby! but a bhappy ending to the story!! Report Review
i am not saying your story is bad but just telling you that if hermoine is voldemort's daughter she is not a pureblood but a half-blood Report Review
u do realize u put the same chappie up twice rite? anyway i luv the story - and u used tom feltons real name lol. anyways it was so sad when dumblydork killed tom - i luved the story 10/10 Report Review
Hey I'm reviewing before reading this chapter 'cause i just read the first one and even if your plot is great ; i love the idea of hermione as a riddle .. You have to be careful because your story is sometimes related as a list of things she did ... It's not very good ..
Example : Mia woke up , she brushed her teeth, she got dressed , she left , she kissed draco , she had a bath , she talked to her father ..
I don't want you to feel bad about my review or anything but try to put a lot more details .. I mean ; Mia woke up with the sun shining on her face , she had forgot to close the curtans ... Bloody sun, she thought.. getting up she walked in to the shower ... etc..
I hope you understand .. even though i'm not a real good writer i love reading other people's storys and i think that yours could be loads better with a little more details , thoughts , scenes , etc..
maybe let someone read it and tell you what they tink .. writting a story takes a heck of a long time for it to be good , great .!
Keep it up , i'll keep reading .! :) Report Review
So Hermione isn't even a little shocked to find that her father is the dark lord? wow. that's weird. Report Review
i love the concept and the story ,(i really do think the whole hermione is voldemorts daughter thing is interesting) i dont understand how hermione could get over hating voldermort so quickly. its ooc and Au so youre entitled to it being possible but perhaps you could show the angst that she faces... it would make the fic seem more vyable ;) but i havent read the whole story yet haha i cant wait to see what happens. Report Review
why is this chapter posted twice? Report Review
at end chap 1 you said her eyes were green.
beginning chap 2 her eyes are blue.
thought I'd tell you
:) Report Review
i love it!!! update or start writing the sequel soon ,plz!
Author's Response: thanks Report Review
Whats with the repeatAuthor's Response: dunno Report Review
ok so why didnt they want Harry, Ron and Ginny to know who she was? strangeAuthor's Response: cause she's voldemorts daughter Report Review
nah kidding its been a long day, but i find it strange how Hermione now Mia treats Voldemort after everything thing that shes been through with him and HarryAuthor's Response: ur not the only person to have said that Report Review
Oh dear. I never thought Dumbledore could be so heartless as to do that. He was a baby! No way to defend himself! It's sick! It's cowardly! He deserved to die!
Sorry about that little rant. I'm rather touchy about that subject. Nice story. Cannot believe that Voldemort would not want to come back. Wonder what his rwction would be if he found out about Thomas Alexander Malfoy?Author's Response: yeah, i have written a sequel tho Report Review
wow thats crazy Hermione is Voldemorts daughter. though it sounds interesting and i cant wait to see what happens next.Author's Response: thanks Report Review
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