{reviewid: 2655026, reviewer: 'GinzPotter'}
6th February 2012:
Ooh! More ASAP please! Love this story!
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{reviewid: 2580017, reviewer: 'tearsofhope'}
29th August 2011:
I think Corrinne could've been a nice character if you'd spent more time on her, but at this point I'm just a bit curious as to why you would ever want to cause Sirius more grief. I guess I've always been sympathetic to him. Another thing: I didn't think Snape told her he loved her ever. Hmmn. All in all, I like your story, though some of it doesn't seem to be terribly original. But is anything really original? Update SOON!!! =)
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{reviewid: 2485020, reviewer: 'Holly'}
23rd February 2011:
:( why did you abandon this?
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{reviewid: 2483470, reviewer: 'harrypottergurl10'}
20th February 2011:
I really liked this story. Keep up the great work.
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{reviewid: 2252063, reviewer: 'prongs%20lover'}
10th November 2009:
wonderful story. this story's dialogue seems incredibly similar to J.K's which is absolutely awesome. You've also got the characters very much down pat and well developed - Lily's exactly like I imagine her to be, a lot of people's portrayal of her is very different to how i imagine her so its nice to see one that's my style of Lily :) The only thing was, to get more of a j.k sort of feeling, my advice is more detail and less gaps. you know ... ~'s.
But other than that, great job and im looking forward to more!
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{reviewid: 2181274, reviewer: 'potterfan_nimisha'}
2nd August 2009:
Its a nice chapter and im happy that corriene's dead she was annoying!and im waiting for an update
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{reviewid: 2180192, reviewer: 'potterfan_nimisha'}
1st August 2009:
Yay theyre back together! it was really sweet. im in love with james
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{reviewid: 2179407, reviewer: 'potterfan_nimisha'}
31st July 2009:
I think you're doing an amazing job with this story even though youve got a few facts wrong in the begining.but its so realistic this whole storyline i just love it all
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{reviewid: 2107426, reviewer: 'Lyall'}
28th April 2009:
I am really liiking how this story is going, i did like Corinne when she was with Sirius, but not anymoree. Kepp it up! :)
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{reviewid: 2040348, reviewer: 'angelchaser13'}
24th January 2009:
Whoa...Corinne died. Wow. Poor Sirius.
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{reviewid: 2040335, reviewer: 'angelchaser13'}
24th January 2009:
Wow, great love confession. By the way, what does "cor" mean?
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{reviewid: 2040332, reviewer: 'angelchaser13'}
24th January 2009:
Aw, come on! I want snogging!
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{reviewid: 2040330, reviewer: 'angelchaser13'}
24th January 2009:
"I smell tension."
"No, it's turkey, Sirius."
Oh, that made me laugh. Really. I swear you've got a gift.
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{reviewid: 2040327, reviewer: 'angelchaser13'}
24th January 2009:
Wow. So that's Sirius when he's drunk. Interesting.
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{reviewid: 2040324, reviewer: 'angelchaser13'}
24th January 2009:
So funny it made me fall off my chair. How's that for a review???
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{reviewid: 2040320, reviewer: 'angelchaser13'}
24th January 2009:
Ooh, good A/N explanation.
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{reviewid: 2040316, reviewer: 'angelchaser13'}
24th January 2009:
Hahahahahahahahaha! Love it! Love it! Brilliant!
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{reviewid: 2040312, reviewer: 'angelchaser13'}
24th January 2009:
Hey, if you want to know anything about Alice, her maiden name was Prewett. She's probably related to Molly Weasley.
Love it!
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{reviewid: 2040309, reviewer: 'angelchaser13'}
24th January 2009:
Oh, yeah, this is brilliant. I'm liking it more and more...
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{reviewid: 2040306, reviewer: 'angelchaser13'}
24th January 2009:
Again, this made me roar with laughter. I think you've got a gift, pottercrazed. Excellent!
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{reviewid: 2040302, reviewer: 'angelchaser13'}
24th January 2009:
Heeheehee! Love it so far!
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{reviewid: 2040295, reviewer: 'angelchaser13'}
24th January 2009:
You potrayed the Quidditch match very well. I enjoyed this.
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{reviewid: 2040291, reviewer: 'angelchaser13'}
24th January 2009:
Very funny, though not as hysterically amusing as the last chapter. But James was a Chaser, not a Seeker...that's all the criticism I have for this chapter.
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{reviewid: 2040283, reviewer: 'angelchaser13'}
24th January 2009:
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Oh, it's brilliant, really brilliant--James is portayed exactly as I imagined he would be! One suggestion, though: JKR's people speak like (I'm going to use one of your sentences): "Sure," said Lily. Not so much "Lily said," but more of "said Lily." I hope that's helpful.
Great job!
angelchaser13
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{reviewid: 2031940, reviewer: 'lilyluna2014'}
13th January 2009:
what does Cor mean???
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