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Review #1, by megthechef43 Hatred

16th May 2013:
Emmo,

Hmm.. This was an interesting chapter. I would love to see more of what was going on. I think you could have spent a bit more time on the breakfast scene with Draco and Demona. I really liked the part with Goyle. It would seem true to fashion that Goyle would have his mouth stuffed so full he could barely talk. You used some interesting descriptive words during the fight such as cranium and thick red blood. Most people would have used skull but I think cranium fits the moment just right.

Megthechef43 aka Meg

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Review #2, by steph Hatred

12th March 2008:
just a random suggestion, but could u space out chapters 2 and 3?
1 and 4 are fine. i dunno, maybe im just a really bad reader lol

aweseome story but-

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Review #3, by hidden soul Hatred

30th March 2005:
i love your story! please update soon

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Review #4, by Mrs Emily Snape Hatred

30th August 2004:
So good, i really like please write more!

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Review #5, by Mme Respect or Lack of it

26th January 2004:
I like it... But oooo...that gurlz got herself some SPUNK!!

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Review #6, by Mme Respect or Lack of it

26th January 2004:
I like it... But oooo...that gurlz got herself some SPUNK!!

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Review #7, by kate m. Hatred

21st January 2004:
i think this chapter was alright. it is a good chapter to branch the next on from.

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Review #8, by ilovedracomalfoy69 Respect or Lack of it

14th December 2003:
it's ok. I think the whole Severus sister-brother thing was really cool, but I believe u could add a few more stuff in there, but besides that it's really good.May I ask why it's rated R though? Cuz that is not an R rating. Plaease read and review my fan fics. Peace out!

Author's Response: i rated it R because of stuff that will happen later in the story. thank you for your review

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Review #9, by confrence buddy, lol Suprise

10th December 2003:
I thought the story was grate, i cant wait to see what happens next! This story is brilliant!

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Review #10, by Erae Suprise

25th November 2003:
Um, hi, have you ever heard of the term MARY-SUE!? Nice try.

Author's Response: yes i have and im just wondering what you base that on seeing as youve only read three chapters. please let me know what you think.

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Review #11, by Chloe Suprise

24th November 2003:
brilliant!

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Review #12, by Gurgi Suprise

23rd November 2003:
I love it draco iz hott! but snape iz sexay as lol u no! *purrz*

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Review #13, by Paige Suprise

23rd November 2003:
AWESOME!!!!!!!! Add more,i want to see where this story goes!!!!!!!!

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