This was a very good story I hope that you continue it!!!! It was very, very GOOD!!!!

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Good so far. Keep writing.

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i like it

Author's Response: Thanks!

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yeah *clap**clap**clap* I like it super much!!!!!!!My bad grammar means satisfaction baby! I applaud you...It probably means nothing, but still.......*SQUEE* at your fanfic (squee is good if you didn't know) Keep writing it pleez!!!!!!!Was gonna write something else but cant remember.....Loves it so much<3<3<3

Author's Response: That means A LOT to me! I love hearing that people like my work. I'm almost done with the second chapter, so please check back soon! -tragedy

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wow what a cool story i can't wait to see what happens please update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks a lot! I'll update as soon as I can. -tragedy

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i love it!! its so sweet!!! a few grammar errors, but nothing major. just commas here and there. but other than that, its awesome!!! pLeAsE wRiTe MoRe!!!!!!

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for the review! I love getting critiques, it helps me improve. I'll write more as soon as I can. -tragedy

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I like it so far it is really rather original. It is very detailed as well which is a plus. I'll keep reading if you keep writting.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I appreciate it a lot. I'll write more as soon as possible. -tragedy

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