Reading Reviews for What Lies Beyond The Veil
6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by jm ravenclaw From Venice To London

3rd February 2010:
I really think you should continue this story. It is really good and could go along way. Imagine if Scipio met Albus Potter. What could happen? Try it.

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Review #2, by Nula From Venice To London

2nd February 2010:
I can't wait for the rest of the story.

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Review #3, by mrscribble From Venice To London

30th January 2004:
Alright, I read the rest of your story on I have to say, the first chapter was the best. Your plotline seems to drag a bit in the second chapter, following up on the next chapters. On the other hand, the story was very fantastical (is that a word?) in the last few chapters... not badly. I think you need to develop the story a bit more. Then again, I'm not hat good myself... : D

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Review #4, by mrscribble From Venice To London

29th November 2003:
Wow. That is great! Keep writing, I loooove your story so far!

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Review #5, by LogicalRaven From Venice To London

22nd November 2003:
good beginning, I'm caught.

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Review #6, by Your Slyth Pal Muggly From Venice To London

22nd November 2003:
Lovely! no noticable spelling mistakes either! This was wonderful, Scipio is a character of much dimension! He is devloped well, I do look forward to reading future chapters, Well done!

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