This is a great story. I was surprised and the ending. Kind of Happy yet really sad. Loved it. Report Review
yhat was amazing i luv it Report Review
Wow. Does that mean neither of them want to be married? The last part is mysterious. It's all amazing though, really well written =D Report Review
Wow! That was so great! It was so deep too.
I usually don`t read one-shots but I love A Collision With Hope on Quizilla so I thought I`d read this and I Love It!
This is definetely going on my favorites! Report Review
i loved it, not as much as i love truth, but i still loved it. can i make you a banner? it just for some reason with good stories, i feel they should have banners. if so, e-mail me at email@example.com, i hope to hear from you soon. Loved the story once again, you're an amazing writer. Report Review
This story is great. You pictured Ron's character and true love perfectly. This story is really has sad ending but I like it anyway. I was looking for a story like this so your story really satisfied me. I like the story a lot. Superb job. Report Review
Although I've read this story before (on Quizilla) I never got to tell you how heart wrenching this story is.
Because let me tell you -- it is. Whenever I read this story, I can feel Ron and Hermione's hearts breaking.
Everytime I read this, I want to cry.
Good job Report Review
Laur, that was beautiful, absolutely beautiful. I'm surprised I never thought to read they stories you had here on HPFF, glad I finally did though. I loved it! Report Review
*sniffle* Oh that was so depressing. But good. Very good. Poor Ron. I liked how you had kept names out of the first part, except for "the Great Harry Potter", which I actually thought shouldn't have been there, but apart from that, it was very good. *sniffle* Report Review
perhaps a bit drawen out at parts but overall very sad and insightful. good job love Aus Report Review
You already know how much I loved this one-shot. You really know how to depress me, Laur. *grins* Take that as a compliment, though. Your writing is full of emotion, and it really shines through beautifully with each word. Although you and I both loathe H/Hr, I loved that you chose Harry as Hermione's husband; as you said before, it made it all the more heartbreaking for Ron. Beautifully done, Laur; sad and heartbreaking, but beautiful. :) Report Review
How cute, made my heart sink slightly. I loved that story. Report Review
That was really good. You may want to edit it again, as there are loads of grammatical errors, but the story line and the way it flowed so well were both fantastic aspects of this piece of work. Report Review
Wow... that was really really good. Beautifully written. My heart broke for Ron at seeing Hermione and Harry married. It made me cry. Not many stories make me cry. Only two other (I believe) have actually made me cry, so good job. Keep up the great work. -Annie Report Review
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