Ah! I keep rereading this trying to figure out what her answer would be. I wish you would come back and finish this story, but I realize it has been a long time since you have written (or at least posted) a chapter for this story, so I don't want to get my hopes up. Well all I wanted to say was that I absolutely love this story. I love Max, Oliver, Jill, even Brooke. I hope you can update or maybe at least let us know how this story was supposed to end, perhaps in an authors note or something. I really need to know, if you couldn't tell. Anyway, even if you don't finish writing this (which will make me sad) I do hope that you keep writing because you have an amazing talent and it would be a shame if you wasted it.

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I NEED THE NEXT CHAPTER ASAP.
END OF STORY.

Great though so far!! :)

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Loves it!!! Sooo cute!!! :)

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Hello Ash here, (short for Ashley)

This story is so good. Loved it. Update soon. :)

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ahh.. i love it!!! such great writing. and max is awsome. you should really finish this!

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oolalala cant wait for more!! xoxox iscreamdraco

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Aw! I hope she says yes. :D
Can't wait for the update.

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UPDATE, please!
What an awesome story!

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WHAT!!
How could you end it there!!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!

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you better make more chapters to this story because u just left me hanging.

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Omigosh!! So original and god!! i picked a random story and this was it XD but i wouldn't have read it if i hadn't seen the name of the main Character.
Maxine.
I saw it and i'm like 'I'M SO READING THIS!!' because Maxine is MY name (i totally hate it as well) and i've never seen a story with my name in it : )

anyway, i'm chatting away : P
Great story, keep up the fabulicious work XD

Maxinarina (Maxine)

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ohhh that's not good :) I love the story!

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Evil, pure evil! i was just really getting into this story. LIKE REALLY GETTING INTO IT! and it ended... and with that!!! Curse you, but bless you at the same time. If she says no I'm finding a way to transport myself into your story, smack her, and kiss Oliver myself!

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now this is just getting silly. it has been over half a year, you have not updated and you have left the biggest cliffhanger of all times just hanging...for half a year. i bet its fingers are getting sore.

dfhdgpefgmfmobo your story is so super good! i wish wish wish you would start writing again. its summer holidays! well it is for me. it might be winter holidays wherever you are...
and writing harrypotter fan fiction is very thereputical. you should write lots more. it will improve your health immensley, i swear. in fact, finishing this story would probably be a perfecty amount to wrie :3 fancy that!

please please please do. i am so keen to know what happens.

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I can't believe you left it like that! Please update soon. She is going to say yes, right?

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This story is awesome! Your characters are extremely well-developed and the plot is very believable. I don't usually like very many stories that focus on other characters, but yours is fantastic. I hope that you will update soon. Seriously, that is a major cliffhanger!

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Hmm...I was wondering, did you quit writting this story? I mean, you haven't posted the new chapter since...september?
Please say you didn't. It's my favorite Oliver/OC story.

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This was an ultimately suspenseful chapter

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You have to be kidding me, :O this is such a great story, and this nerve wrecking cliffhanger is killing me HAhahaha!!! Update soon please

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Ah...nooo, it's a cliffie! how could you!
oh well... Yay! Oliver asked Max!
8969460934769845968034876/10...yep

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Max Max Max...why cant she just admit that she likes Oliver?
Awesome chapter!
10/10

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Oooo that was good. :]
I'm writing an Oliver/OC fic too, but he story thingy is closed.(arent I articulate?)
Oh and to your friend Jen, "Aren't we all?" :D
10/10

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hey good chappie, I'm glad that Max realizes she likes Oliver.

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“Will you be my girlfriend?”

*gasps* Oh it's like a knife in my heart..lol nah I still love it Trish! And unfortunately now I think I'm becoming a Max/Oliver shipper! The highest compliment coming from me...lol

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Still love the story Trish! Although xD I'm still bias as I love Max but I want Jenn...I mean JEN to get him too lol (keep having to remind myself that it's not me in the story..yet isn't it convienent that all your stories are now about Oliver? lol I knew I corrupted you!

*hugs* but miss you lots dear and keep up the great work!

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