A little bit hurried, not enough conclusion, but if you would make it longer and add some more dialect and conclusion it could be really good.

Author's Response: yeah, I know... I'm not good with conclusions... sorry, lol... thanks for the review!

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Your ending could have had more detail. Other than that, great job! The song and the fic just go together so perfectly!

(PS Please review my one-shot, What Dumbledore Said. Thanks!)

Author's Response: thanks, i'll check out you fan fic for sure.

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Awesome job!! I like it a lot! (In case you havent figured out who this is yet..two words..rocker duck!) lol

Author's Response: HI!!! thatnks for the review. I'm glad you liked it. if you liked this story you might wanna check out my other story, it has three chapters but it's not complete yet. ttyl...rocker duck hehehe

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bit abrupt ending

Author's Response: Yeah I know I think the ending sucks.

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hehe--i snickered at the title and instantly knew--ooh..thats james blunt. so i decided to read it...pretty good i have to say...but my fav part in the song "she was with another man" is suuuuuuper funny when you try to mimic how he sings it EXACTLY..it really is,...haha.but its good for a shot shifter

Author's Response: Thanks I'm glad you enjoyed my story.

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good one, i liked it! but i never heard the song before, so i'll have to check into that! lol

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it!

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*cries* how cute! great job!~K

Author's Response: Thanks a-million.

Author's Response: Thanks a-million.

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you get a *BIG SMILE AND SOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*

Author's Response: Thanks I'm glad you liked it, I personally thought it was corny.

Author's Response: Thanks I'm glad you liked it, I personally thought it was corny.

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