Very cute and sweet. I think you should try to add some more detail but otherwise very cute story! Report Review
really good-loved it! Report Review
AW! How sweet! I only spotted one mistake and that was you put 'there' instead of 'their'. It's okay, it's a common mistake. I liked it a LOT when you said, 'He had just endured the longest best man speech ever'. LOL!!! The ending was really sweet! *tear* I really liked it!!! Nice job for a first fic!!! ;) Report Review
Dude that was AMAZING! The BEST story EVER! xxxAuthor's Response: Thank you thank you thank you!! Report Review
Lovely story and an excellent finish...well done!Author's Response: Thank you very much! Report Review
gr8 story...lov it! u r a gr8 author...i criusly cant giv u any tips!Author's Response: I'm sure that isn't true...thank you so much for your review and praise! Report Review
this is well gd.... u have 2 carry it on!!Author's Response: thank you...it was supposed to end in suspense like that though.... Report Review
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