{reviewid: 2772712, reviewer: 'amylouiseshazza1998'}
25th February 2013:
Itz the most perfect thing ever and to make it even more beautiful you can
imagine a baby nevil writing it. I cried
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{reviewid: 2772711, reviewer: 'amylouiseshazza1998'}
25th February 2013:
Itz the most perfect thing ever and to make it even more beautiful you can
imagine a baby nevil writing it. I cried
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{reviewid: 2770896, reviewer: 'Alena%20MacLean'}
15th February 2013:
You should be very proud of yourself because you owned that. You owned it. I know that I'm a little late, I mean, this won a Dobby ages ago, but congratulations anyway. That made me cry, and I don't cry easily. Thank you.
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{reviewid: 2757000, reviewer: 'Cool%20Guy%20Thats%20Me%21'}
7th December 2012:
That is sad you should write another chapter about how her life is now. Just a suggestion
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{reviewid: 2756180, reviewer: 'Zany'}
4th December 2012:
Hauntingly beautiful.
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{reviewid: 2751541, reviewer: 'FredWeasleyIsMyKing'}
9th November 2012:
Wow.. this is so heartbraking! It could be so true of alot of the kids in HP! Well done, you've done an amazing job!
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{reviewid: 2738392, reviewer: 'noname'}
8th September 2012:
Oh, my gosh. GREAT story. AMAZING.
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{reviewid: 2706350, reviewer: 'Phoenix_feather123'}
9th June 2012:
You should make the character send it and make voldemort reply or something
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{reviewid: 2681566, reviewer: 'Mimaligrl2012'}
5th April 2012:
Awww this is so sad and cute. I absolutely love it.
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{reviewid: 2666343, reviewer: 'SerpentineOffering'}
29th February 2012:
Unique and quite enjoyable to read :)
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{reviewid: 2642878, reviewer: 'Pottergirl75'}
13th January 2012:
Three letter, one word: wow.
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{reviewid: 2620421, reviewer: 'FollowTheSpiders'}
25th November 2011:
You've captured a child's view perfectly. Some of the lines had me pretty choked up, especially when the child called him Mr. Voldemort. :(
As sad as it was, this was one of my favorite pieces of fan fiction that I have ever read. It was truly original. Keep up the great work.
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{reviewid: 2615414, reviewer: 'Elle%20Young'}
13th November 2011:
The part where you go "I put my head on Daddy’s chest to listen to the thump thump thump of his heart, but I couldn’t hear it anymore. Maybe his heart was sleeping."
Really breaks my heart! Especially "Maybe his heart was sleeping." touched me so much, this so emotional and wonderful! I love how we were in a child's perspective and she doesn't fully understand why Voldemort went after her family, because if it was within a teenager's pov. it would've made us all wonder why you didn't include why he hand come. Beautifully written! 10/10 definitely a true Dobby award!
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{reviewid: 2611954, reviewer: 'Redvines714'}
5th November 2011:
wow... clever idea! Pretty sad, but still a great idea for a one shot! I also love how it's written from the perspective of this little kid (well i guess it is their letter.. duh).
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{reviewid: 2600423, reviewer: 'thepottergirl'}
10th October 2011:
Very touching story. Very Very Very Very nice.
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{reviewid: 2599146, reviewer: 'Hermione%20Granger%20fan'}
6th October 2011:
I loved your story it was so emotional.
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{reviewid: 2579808, reviewer: 'Shannedo'}
28th August 2011:
When I read this I cried and cried and cried again. The true horror of this story combined with what little knowledge a young child has of the world is heart wrenching. That line "Maybe his heart was sleeping" made me cry even harder. And then there's the fact that she's too young to fully understand that her parents really aren't coming back. I lost someone close to me when I was young and you still carry that very very faint glimmer of hope that they're coming back. It's so faint that normally an individual doesn't realise it's there. It is only when you grow wiser that the devastating fact that they really are dead hits home. Absolutley amazing and it totally convinced me that it was written from a child's perspective. Well done :)
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{reviewid: 2576722, reviewer: 'elizabethd37'}
23rd August 2011:
This broke my heart. Well written considering it's a small child writing it. I loved it, even though it made me cry. :(
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{reviewid: 2565045, reviewer: 'nitenel'}
8th August 2011:
This was great. It reminded me of Sawyer's letter in Lost!
10/10 easily.
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{reviewid: 2562823, reviewer: 'peace2lovepotter'}
6th August 2011:
I read this to my brother and my mum, and we both cried. This is so sad! A million out of 10! Love Livvy x :)
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{reviewid: 2558234, reviewer: 'xxFlutterStutterBOOMBOOMxx'}
1st August 2011:
Oh, that's just so heartbreaking. I like that you did it from the POV of a little girl, instead of a teenager who'd be more able to understand. This way, we don't get sidetracked by descriptions of WHY Voldemort was there or what happened later, but instead we're really able to see the pain he caused. Great job!
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{reviewid: 2557812, reviewer: 'BJMJOOO'}
31st July 2011:
A really good idea, and well deserving of the Dobby award. Really sad and well written.
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{reviewid: 2556331, reviewer: 'Jess%20the%20Enthusiast'}
28th July 2011:
That was devistating but excellent nonetheless. Beautifully written 10/10
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{reviewid: 2534041, reviewer: 'Kat'}
14th June 2011:
Inspired by Sawyer (James) Ford of LOST's letter to 'Mr. Sawyer', much?
Author's Response: Yes, indeed.
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{reviewid: 2528539, reviewer: 'kathleen'}
31st May 2011:
this is a really touching story and its amazing!! keep writing :)
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!
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