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Reading Reviews for Dear Lord Voldemort
176 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Dóssy Vilja A Letter Never Sent

14th January 2017:
Hi, I liket this one-shot! It's simple and it's trus that it's not that original, but it is still well-writen - it goes to me 'favourites' collection :)
Just one thing I was missing: the signature to the letter. There are not so many occasions we know of when Voldemort killed both a husband and wife, so my guess would be that victims are Mr. and Mrs. Bones and the girl writing the letter is either the aunt or the mother of Susan Bones.
Can you please add a signature and a date as to a proper letter? ;-)
Thanks again for writing this!

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Review #2, by J A Letter Never Sent

18th October 2015:
wow, that is so good

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Review #3, by HPfangirl12321 A Letter Never Sent

13th October 2014:
I LOVE this! It's so good. You did an awesome job capturing the grief and confusion of the Girl. I don't think I could ever be that good. Please please right more of the same, maybe even another letter to Voldemort. Keep up the great work!

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Review #4, by Kairia15 A Letter Never Sent

12th August 2014:
This is beautifully tragic. Too bad Voldemort never got this letter.

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Review #5, by Kennos A Letter Never Sent

29th November 2013:
Not bad... but I haven't found this story amazing either. I don't understand why the reviews seem so good. It's nice to read but very basic and not so original. But maybe I tend to expect too much from the stories on this website

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Review #6, by LadyL8 A Letter Never Sent

14th July 2013:
Hey there.

This was so sad. I'm close to tears now (actually I'm already crying). And it was just... it's just so well-written.

Firstly, I want to say I loved the idea. How did you come up with that? Okay now that I have said that, I just want to say that I just loved how the letter was written. It was so childish-like, but still so mature in some ways. This is one clever kid, that has gone through something really difficult.

And the description of how Voldemort killed the parents was just ... I just wanted to jump into your story and get the little kid away. It was so difficult to read. But so well-written.

The final line is my favourite. "I know that Mummy and Daddy are dead, and it's all your fault." It's just so ... heartbreaking!

I'm speachless. This was amazing. I really loved it. 10/10

Yours Sincerely

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Review #7, by ginerva_molly_weasley A Letter Never Sent

14th July 2013:
I almost want to cry this is the sweetest thing I have ever read from that little boy!

The letter is written in such a sweet childlike fashion which is adorable as it means that we really get to see inside the head of this child and the confusion he had when he saw his mother and father just lying there on the ground and not getting up.

Also I think the chapter title is sweet too. A letter never sent. Its just so adorable but so sad at the same time to know that he watched as his family died in front of him the poor little boy.

Well done on this. It was truly something

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Review #8, by Anonymous A Letter Never Sent

26th June 2013:
I think I'm going to cry.

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Review #9, by amylouiseshazza1998 A Letter Never Sent

25th February 2013:
Itz the most perfect thing ever and to make it even more beautiful you can
imagine a baby nevil writing it. I cried

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Review #10, by amylouiseshazza1998 A Letter Never Sent

25th February 2013:
Itz the most perfect thing ever and to make it even more beautiful you can
imagine a baby nevil writing it. I cried

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Review #11, by Alena MacLean A Letter Never Sent

15th February 2013:
You should be very proud of yourself because you owned that. You owned it. I know that I'm a little late, I mean, this won a Dobby ages ago, but congratulations anyway. That made me cry, and I don't cry easily. Thank you.

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Review #12, by Cool Guy Thats Me! A Letter Never Sent

7th December 2012:
That is sad you should write another chapter about how her life is now. Just a suggestion

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Review #13, by Zany A Letter Never Sent

4th December 2012:
Hauntingly beautiful.

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Review #14, by FredWeasleyIsMyKing A Letter Never Sent

9th November 2012:
Wow.. this is so heartbraking! It could be so true of alot of the kids in HP! Well done, you've done an amazing job!

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Review #15, by noname A Letter Never Sent

8th September 2012:
Oh, my gosh. GREAT story. AMAZING.

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Review #16, by Phoenix_feather123 A Letter Never Sent

9th June 2012:
You should make the character send it and make voldemort reply or something

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Review #17, by Mimaligrl2012 A Letter Never Sent

5th April 2012:
Awww this is so sad and cute. I absolutely love it.

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Review #18, by SerpentineOffering A Letter Never Sent

29th February 2012:
Unique and quite enjoyable to read :)

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Review #19, by Pottergirl75 A Letter Never Sent

13th January 2012:
Three letter, one word: wow.

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Review #20, by FollowTheSpiders A Letter Never Sent

25th November 2011:
You've captured a child's view perfectly. Some of the lines had me pretty choked up, especially when the child called him Mr. Voldemort. :(
As sad as it was, this was one of my favorite pieces of fan fiction that I have ever read. It was truly original. Keep up the great work.

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Review #21, by Elle Young A Letter Never Sent

13th November 2011:
The part where you go "I put my head on Daddy’s chest to listen to the thump thump thump of his heart, but I couldn’t hear it anymore. Maybe his heart was sleeping."
Really breaks my heart! Especially "Maybe his heart was sleeping." touched me so much, this so emotional and wonderful! I love how we were in a child's perspective and she doesn't fully understand why Voldemort went after her family, because if it was within a teenager's pov. it would've made us all wonder why you didn't include why he hand come. Beautifully written! 10/10 definitely a true Dobby award!

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Review #22, by Redvines714 A Letter Never Sent

5th November 2011:
wow... clever idea! Pretty sad, but still a great idea for a one shot! I also love how it's written from the perspective of this little kid (well i guess it is their letter.. duh).

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Review #23, by thepottergirl A Letter Never Sent

10th October 2011:
Very touching story. Very Very Very Very nice.

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Review #24, by Hermione Granger fan A Letter Never Sent

6th October 2011:
I loved your story it was so emotional.

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Review #25, by Shannedo A Letter Never Sent

28th August 2011:
When I read this I cried and cried and cried again. The true horror of this story combined with what little knowledge a young child has of the world is heart wrenching. That line "Maybe his heart was sleeping" made me cry even harder. And then there's the fact that she's too young to fully understand that her parents really aren't coming back. I lost someone close to me when I was young and you still carry that very very faint glimmer of hope that they're coming back. It's so faint that normally an individual doesn't realise it's there. It is only when you grow wiser that the devastating fact that they really are dead hits home. Absolutley amazing and it totally convinced me that it was written from a child's perspective. Well done :)

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