{reviewid: 2555238, reviewer: 'Lauren'}
27th July 2011:
The idea behind this story is really good, and something that I haven't seen before, but I think this story could have been better.
The writing is poor and the story line is kind of boring!
I love the idea, and I think this has the potential to be really good, but overall it failed to keep my attention!
I would love to see someone else tackle this idea, and hopefully write it better and with more of a plot!
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{reviewid: 2377486, reviewer: 'abbymalfoy'}
12th July 2010:
thats funny. hes so awkward! its funny^^ but you dont have to put new "s around a new sentance
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{reviewid: 2225702, reviewer: 'FallenAmaranth'}
27th September 2009:
it's a great story idea and all but i just can't read it. There's no paragraphs or speech marks etc.
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{reviewid: 1985720, reviewer: 'sheala22'}
11th November 2008:
is there a nother story to dis
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{reviewid: 1838046, reviewer: 'dobby_94'}
20th February 2008:
dude
this is rly not good
its so incomplete and like choppy
too short
not enough detail
srlsy?
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{reviewid: 1835825, reviewer: 'TyraeO'}
18th February 2008:
NO!!! You can't just say it's complete after that! WHAT THE HELL?!?!? ARGH! *pouts* good story, horrible ending.
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{reviewid: 1690137, reviewer: 'LadyLatina'}
29th October 2007:
nice story keep at it.
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{reviewid: 1668478, reviewer: 'daisymaisy'}
14th October 2007:
you need 2 make ur chapters paragraphed and not all clumped 2getha. It's ok, not the best I've seen, but if you put your mind to it then it'll be really good! sorry if it sounds like I'm giving you a bashing, I'm just trying to give you my opinion on this story and where you need to improve.
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{reviewid: 1625910, reviewer: 'Mrs%20George%20Weasley'}
12th September 2007:
awsome story totally diffrent! guys and girls surronding them to needed and a punk hermione to cool!
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{reviewid: 1611457, reviewer: 'hjpotter'}
3rd September 2007:
you really need to use punctuation
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{reviewid: 1579769, reviewer: 'hermioneanddraco'}
17th August 2007:
thats it the whole story! omg could u plz make a sequel!
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{reviewid: 1575859, reviewer: 'hermioneanddraco'}
15th August 2007:
ever heard of these:""
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{reviewid: 1514345, reviewer: 'meldy415'}
14th July 2007:
hurry! I can't wait for the rest!
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{reviewid: 1489261, reviewer: 'vipergryffindor'}
30th June 2007:
write 4 goodness sake !
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{reviewid: 1375162, reviewer: 'Megg'}
11th April 2007:
Hmmm... It surprises me that you've been pegged as an author. Maybe I'm judging you too harshly and this just is something you wrote in 10 minutes.
But first of all, your typing is atrocious. Your plot lacks something as well... How about an exposition, some rising action, a climax, some falling action, and a resolution?
Thank God you're not pursuing a career as a writer. Though your hypothetical editor would get paid generously for all the work they would have to do...
If I were you, I'd delete this from existence to keep myself from being forever embarrassed. Just a heads up.
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{reviewid: 1231291, reviewer: 'ViperGryffindor'}
17th December 2006:
do u like "hot draco"?
my email is ViperGryffindor31068@mugglenet.com not ViperGryffindor@mugglenet.com sorry
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{reviewid: 1231282, reviewer: 'ViperGryffindor'}
| Review #17, by ViperGryffindor | Draco |
17th December 2006:
I DON'T WANT TO BE A WRITER! I WANNA BE A VET!ME TO
email me at ViperGryffindor@mugglenet.com
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{reviewid: 1193548, reviewer: 'phoenix_abaze'}
12th November 2006:
good, very original story
please carry on.
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{reviewid: 1180201, reviewer: 'SeriousSiriusLover'}
30th October 2006:
i was wondering if there is a sequal to this storie cuz i liked it if there is then e-mail me at snickerdodle107@aim.com thakz
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{reviewid: 1149580, reviewer: 'SeverusSnapesWife'}
29th September 2006:
cool story!!!!!
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{reviewid: 1136077, reviewer: 'Christy86'}
13th September 2006:
i really like your story i hope you keep on writing
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{reviewid: 1106511, reviewer: 'dracos_lover365'}
16th August 2006:
i liked the story i hope there is seqeuel
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{reviewid: 1082483, reviewer: 'trillian42'}
29th July 2006:
totally awesome story!! def 1 of my favs so far! update!!
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{reviewid: 1077888, reviewer: 'ShadysideQueen'}
26th July 2006:
Great job! Keep up the work for other stories as well.
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{reviewid: 1050882, reviewer: 'Dark%20Princess%2006'}
6th July 2006:
you have to finish the story!
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