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Review #1, by Taylor The Dursleys

23rd February 2006:
nice keep it up but you need way more detail.

Author's Response: Thanks.. I knew that there was something missing but i couldnt figure it out. SO thanks for tellilng me :) and i apologise if i have not written yet as i am really busy at the moment

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