I didn't waste time reading the story.
I would like to inform you, that JK herself has stated that Dumbledore is gay.
Mrs XAuthor's Response: well as it would seem you are not only gay but immature and rude. Please discontinue your reviews and stop reading my stories if you object to them. Report Review
~laughing,cant breathe~i loved it and that was an awesome story
*Liz*Author's Response: I always adored the end of this story, now I just need to finish the others. Report Review
i really really really loved it!Author's Response: thanks a lot. Report Review
This was probably the best short story on this site! lol I loved it, very creative. 10/10 from me. =DAuthor's Response: Thanks, try my Girls Just Wanna Kick Butt stories, their long, but I think their good Report Review
aww i love this story! wish i could read more! great idea about the mauraderettes and who they really are!! hope to be seeing more stories!!Author's Response: there are more stories. Report Review
I loved it. It was a great idea to have the girls be Harry's parents, Sirius and Dumbledore. You'r writing is great. Author's Response: thanks you so much Report Review
it was good ...very quickAuthor's Response: I know this wasn't made to be a long story. Report Review
I love it so far, I'm just a little confused on who's who (I mean with their apperance). It's a brillant idea and I def. want to continue reading. It's also very well written. Thanks for the good read. ^_^
~livelovelaughAuthor's Response: okay, Moony is the blonde girl that looks like remus.
Squeaks is a girl with mousy brown hair
Padfoot had black hair and blue eyes
and Doe has red hair and hazel eyes Report Review
Aw. I love this story. I hope you updae soon.
-Dizzy.Author's Response: I will do my best
You know what?I HATE YOU!!!Harry is supposed to kill voldemort......O.o I mean mouldywart BY HIMSELF!!! Maybe with ginny,hermione,andron But NOBODY ELSE. I'll tell J.k. and then she'll sue you for saying Harry gets his power from EVERYBODY else.He might get his power from his "family" BUT NOBODY ELSE!!!!!!!!!! Is that clear?NOBODY!NNNNNNOOOOOOBBBBBBOOOOOODDDDDDYYYYYY!!!!!!!Author's Response: You know you're as crazy as i am except you don't like my style of writing. Harry does gget his power from his family in a way but you'll see when the story is done. Report Review
May I point out Ginny's eyes are brown not blue :P A bit rushed and needs betaing but generally good. Author's Response: WOW I thought they we blue. Oh well I'll change it later, I have to finish the story first. Report Review
i really like your story!! especially the harry/ginny thing!! i hope to see more chapters up soon! i just wanted to say that at the beginnig of this chapter jamie's name switched to lily..:)
Bella Author's Response: Thank you for replying and I definatly have to fix that thing about Jamie and Lily. thanks again.
-Kai Report Review
Good startAuthor's Response: thank yah Report Review
I like it! Update!!!!!!!!!!! The whole idea is cool! I never thought about girl marauders untill now anyway. Author's Response: thanky you and when you learn who they are I swear it will shock you. Report Review
This is a very interesting story.Author's Response: thank you keep reviewing Report Review
I believe this is one of the best stories that I've ever read! Keep up the good work.Author's Response: thanks Report Review
it's a great fic so far .... need more lol!! update soonAuthor's Response: I just sent in a new chapter no it just has to be updated Report Review
Awww i love!
Write more soon!Author's Response: got it chapter 2 on it's way Report Review
Why'd you stop?!
Author's Response: I didn't the secound chapter must not be up yet. Report Review
U could think of more names for the girls instead of Padfoot and Moony. Squeaks and Doe are okay but I think u should change Padfoots and Moony's names cuz that's Sirius and Moony's names. Like for Moony, u could put wolfie or something else. Other than that, great story....Author's Response: I need them like that, they are supposed to be part of the trail of the clues or else I would have changed them along with Squeaks and Doe, but don't worry later in the story they will change. Report Review
Terms of Service
categories & genres
short story collection