hi. I just read your story and it is very good. My favorie character is Snape. he shows that there is a good and evil side to all of us. Like a jekell and hyde character. Also very mysterious and brooding. I hope you continue your story and take care.

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i luv ur story ur a great writer cant wait till its done u should think bout writin professionally

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continue!!!!! itz so goooood!!!!!

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this story is going great i rly like what your doing with it update soon hopefully since harry is getting older an is learning new things just my opinion though u should make him an animagus an a griffin u know lion with wings wouldnt that be a cool twist to the story an harry does love to fly but its up to you. you still have a great story

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hmmmm, this is definately a different sort of story. i hope u dont mind a bit of critique b/c i have some. the story is kinda jumpy and really fast paced. just thot i ought 2 tell u. i kno when i write fics im the same way and it looks horrible when i go back and read them again. anyway, i really hope u continue with the fic, its great! update soon.

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No offense but seeing as you haven't updated in a long time, I'd say you've left the site and aren't continuing this, which is a shame because there was a good story in this. Anyways I can't force you to write, but chances are you're not even reading this, so there really is no point in even trying to ask.

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Great story!!!!! Plz update!!!!!

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ADD MORE ADD MORE

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This story is absolutely fabulous! I love it, I love the way that you did the same thing that JK Rowling says she does and that is use Hermione and Dumbledore for background information. This is almost like reading a real HP book! Anyway, I put this story under my recommendations. Keep updating!

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please update soon. i like the way that you depict the characters personalities, it seems to be the way that jkr left them at the end ofthe fifth book, also this is a really good story line. i can\'t wait to find out what happens. update soon

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This is SOOO good, please update as soon as possible!!! I love this story!!`

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its good. when will u write the next chapter?

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O I hope you update soon. I want to really read your story. ~Siriussnape~

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Please write more soon! It´s really one of my favourite stories!!! I like Harry the way you discribe him! It´s so real!!! As if I´m reading JK Rowlings 6th book. I must have read your story more often than \"OotP\"... PLEASE GIVE ME MORE!!! IT´S REALLY GREAT!

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Wow, this is really well done. I like the storyline and the plot. UPDATE SOON Please! I\'m begging you.

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great story write more soon dont leave me hanging

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I reread your story again and I really want you to update!! ~Siriussnape~

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I liked it it was good, nice plot though, the last chaper was a cliff hanger and it killed me, great story

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again a very good chapter. give us MORE!

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Ummm....all 3 chasers have graduated, think about it. If they are one year above harry, that would mean they would have been 2nd years in book 1, and would\'ve been new to the quidditch team, but they werent, and they obviously wern\'t playing in their 1st year, cause Harry was the only 1st year player in a century. just thought i would mention it...

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Wow, finally an update!! I loved the chapter and I hope you continue writing it becuase I\'m very interested in what happens. Please hurry with the next chapter!!! ~Siriussnape~

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this is a great story carry on writin it

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CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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puleze finished the edamn, story i am addicted

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awesome story. are you JK Rowling, cause it\'s as if I\'m reading the sixth book

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