{reviewid: 1174734, reviewer: 'dq3'}
25th October 2006:
man this story is messed up! but its good, very addictive! very sexual! lol
keep up the good work...
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. I really enjoy reading these reviews.
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{reviewid: 1052663, reviewer: 'sealpamela'}
7th July 2006:
Aww sad, but I have a questipn did ron like lose all of his legs up to his knee cap or does he still have legs that don't function well.
Author's Response: He still has legs that don't fucntion well. And thnak you for your kind reviews.
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{reviewid: 1052636, reviewer: 'sealpamela'}
7th July 2006:
I hope this has a happy ending.
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{reviewid: 1052635, reviewer: 'sealpamela'}
7th July 2006:
I hope this has a happy ending.
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{reviewid: 1052634, reviewer: 'sealpamela'}
7th July 2006:
I hope this has a happy ending.
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{reviewid: 1052601, reviewer: 'sealpamela'}
7th July 2006:
You're story has a few grammar errors but I love it.
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{reviewid: 1052577, reviewer: 'sealpamela'}
7th July 2006:
I love this story
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{reviewid: 1052555, reviewer: 'sealpamela'}
7th July 2006:
This is really good.
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{reviewid: 1052506, reviewer: 'sealpamela'}
7th July 2006:
That's so good.
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{reviewid: 1052470, reviewer: 'sealpamela'}
7th July 2006:
Hmmm so very interesting
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{reviewid: 994678, reviewer: 'Serenity0047'}
21st May 2006:
i'm gonna be honest and say i know where this is going, but i still want to read it! sure a sign of a good author is being able to surpirise your audience, but another sign of a good author is if the reader can't stop reading, even when they know what is gonna happen. i can't wait to hear about it!
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{reviewid: 930577, reviewer: 'Shii%20and%20Nel'}
9th March 2006:
Pretty good, a little choppy, could use more blending/fillers, but it's otherwise pretty good. =)
Author's Response: I should look into one of those so-called "Betas". Thanks for pointing it out.
Author's Response: I should look into one of those so-called "Betas". Thanks for pointing it out.
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{reviewid: 924289, reviewer: 'Ginevra%20WP'}
4th March 2006:
AWESOME STORY! It's extremely interesting! I hope you update soon! I really want to keep reading it!
Author's Response: Chapter 5 is being validated... About 2000 words, so it should be up... In about a week.................. Yeah. I really appreciate you're liking to my story. Thank you, a lot!
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{reviewid: 922728, reviewer: 'Rachel'}
2nd March 2006:
thats was a little confusing
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{reviewid: 920064, reviewer: 'maggiedalena'}
28th February 2006:
This story sounds interesting but it's kind of confusing. Of course, I'm not the brightest person in the world.
Author's Response: I suggest reading it as a whole, considering I reference chapters too often. I'm doing my best NOT to make it completely horryfyingly confusing but then again the Hitchhiker's Guide was a little confusing too. Thank you very much for continuing reading despite the confusion....... Stop saying confuse, me....
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{reviewid: 909362, reviewer: 'LadyMione'}
20th February 2006:
I understood it very well. I liked it alot. Please update soon. :)
Author's Response: Wow! Thanks.... chapter 2 is waiting.. Has been for a few days now. But thank you!
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{reviewid: 908752, reviewer: 'maggiedalena'}
19th February 2006:
The story sounds like it has a good plot but it's a little confusing.
Author's Response: Thank you, a lot, for pointing this out. I knew there was something wrong with this story... There always is.
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