That was so freakin weird! You have a good style though. I am sort of doubting myself weather I like the story but the write is good.

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sry i really hate two say this but WHERE THE Hell is the plot? sry again, hi

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woah...that's it woah....that is one of the wierdest, yet one of teh best fics i have ever read. I doubt i will ever forget it....wow...good job!!!

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that was the weirdest, yet one of the coolest stories i've ever read

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woa

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actually you have brilliant ideas but the thing is you have to refined them...

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Interesting story. I quite liked it. Loved the twist at the end. Good show.

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i hate ti when gr8 storis are finished. waaaaaaa tears. write another 1please

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that's so gd. i love it. is it finished? i hope not.

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hmmmmmm.... *Puts pinkey-finger up to edge of mouth* very eeeenterresting........ MUST READ MORE!!!!! Bye!

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i js thought I'd add- I'm of still debating whether I liked the story itself or not. But I have to say that your writing style is very good. Look forward to reading more of your storys =)

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Thats the strangest fan fic I've eva read. Nevertherless it was still very interesting and well written. It's nice to see someone not following the usual plot and coming up with something completely different. I loved the twist at the end though. The only critizism i would make is that Ginny's prophesy was a little odd, and I think it would have been better if you left it out, I also the thought the connection to the newt exams a little out of place. Otherwise an excellet story! Great Job!

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I think the end is sosrt of a let down.Did you get it from Bill and Ted's Excellent Adventure? And if Ginny realized the monarchy was useless, why didn't Ron?

Author's Response: Hmm. Never thought of that. I thought of deleting the last chapter, but that still left Ginny's prophecy. Of course, I could have deleted Ginny's prophecy. But no, I hadn't seen Bill and Ted's Excellent Adventure before I wrote this. Funny movie, though!

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I love it. The story confuses me, especially the part about the king/gueen controlling Fudge and Dumbledore letting Katrina go meet Voldemort, but its so suspenseful and I really like it.

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this is the stragest, most impossible fan fic i've ever heard.... but i like it.

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very diffrent and interesting...

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that is a really weird story but at the same time well written and kept my intrest! even though the story wasn't to good. that shows you are a very good writter you made a wretched story become acceptable!

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This is the most confusing fanfic I've read! Wait, no this is the most confusing thing I've ever read or will read, but it's cool!

Author's Response: Sorry about the confusing and things, but I had to put it up, just to see what people thought. Obviously, that was confusing. But when I finish off this one, the next will be better (hopefully). :) Thank you!

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Woah. Cunfuzzling! lol. Good, but confuzzling! o_O

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Wow. Great chappie! I can't wait for the next developement!!!

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Fine, just cut it off right at the prophecy. No, i don't mind... *grumbles about stupid authors and their stupid cliffhangers* *runs off to torture other innocent souls with cliffhangers*

Author's Response: I didn't originally mean for it to be a chapter story, I only used to write one-shots, so the transitions stink in this one and another I haven't added. Sorry. *big grin* I'll try to update soon, maybe when the world makes sense.

Author's Response: Updated! Ch. 2 is now up.

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Very interesting and promising beginning, I hope u update again soon.

Author's Response: :D Love your name! *uber big grin* Thanks, I'm glad you like it.

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