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Review #1, by aurelia.penderwick Back to School

10th April 2012:
PLEASE finish this story. It's made of awesome. ;)

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Review #2, by Bookwyrm A Trip to London

23rd March 2008:
It's really really really good! Keep up the amazing work, I can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: thanks! i'm writing the next chapter as we speak...

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Review #3, by Bookwyrm French Lesson

23rd March 2008:
This is GREAT! I love it! It's a really cool plot line!

Author's Response: thanks! Next chapter should be up soon!

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Review #4, by Abi French Lesson

18th December 2007:
Still reeeadddiiinnnggg... haha.
My favorite part of this is definately the charachterization of Sirius haha...and definately the joke about French :P

Author's Response: lolll why thank you!

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Review #5, by Abi Predictions

18th December 2007:
Oh oh oh! Cue suspense! I love it so far--particularly the Sirius/Hannah dynamic..poor Hannah.. (hhaha, reminds me of Helena from Midsummer nights dream oddly enough)

I have to keep reading hehehe.I'll review more then :P

Author's Response: dude! you're sitting next to me...and it IS like Helena lmao

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Review #6, by emily A Trip to London

30th August 2007:
any update soon?

Author's Response: yeah...it's half done

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Review #7, by pigwidgeon385 Lost in the Mall

22nd June 2007:
This story is really cute. Basically the same suggestions as I made before. I'm adding this to my favs because I'd love to finish when I get some time. :)

Author's Response: Thank you!!! I'm so glad you like it!!!

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Review #8, by pigwidgeon385 Being a Muggle

22nd June 2007:
Hm... some CC: those random a/n in the middle of the story really disrupt the flow. How come no one is acting like this is weird at all? If Sirius Black walked up to me I'd kinda be freakin' out for quite a bit. I'd probably quiz him on trivia. :P Why has no one mentioned that he died yet? Oh, and the lengthy descriptions of people are not all that fun to read.

On a positive note, I'm really loving this story. Nice writing and cool plot. :)

Author's Response: yeah...i'm doing a re-write of chapters 2 and 3 for those very reasons! and I'm glad you like it!

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Review #9, by pigwidgeon385 French Lesson

22nd June 2007:
I really, really like this! When does Sirius find out he died? :P This is great. :)

Author's Response: or does Sirius find out he died?? *winks* I'm glad you like it!

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Review #10, by pigwidgeon385 Predictions

22nd June 2007:
:-O This is great so far! Your writing style is great - reminds me of JK's, actually. Wonderful job! I'm bursting to read more. :P

Author's Response: wow...I'm glad you liked it! and reminds you of JKs??? I'm honored!!!

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Review #11, by emle rose A Trip to London

22nd June 2007:
I really feel bad for James. He's so worried and Sirius is just fine, for the most part. I guess there really is no magic in that world. Unless... no, probably not. But that's up to you. Update soon!

Author's Response: that is up to me...and you shall see.... *evil grin*

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Review #12, by emle rose The Prank War Pt. 2/Ffee Finds Out

22nd June 2007:
I thought it had just enough Drea/Sirius moments. Good chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

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Review #13, by emle rose The Prank War Pt. 1

22nd June 2007:
Ohh, that was bad. I would have been so embarrassed if my guy friends did that to me! I like this one. The pranks are fun. I'm glad there more of it.

Author's Response: Good to hear! Glad you liked the pranks!

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Review #14, by emle rose Padfoot Goes to the Vet

22nd June 2007:
poor boy

Author's Response: haha yes...

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Review #15, by emle rose Being a Muggle

22nd June 2007:
Wow, I can see how Sirius is having difficulty in remembering everything. And I like how Audra's quick solution is to tell people he was in a mental institution!

Author's Response: haha yeah...Audra comes up with some pretty good solutions!

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Review #16, by emle rose French Lesson

22nd June 2007:
It's funny how he doesn't know what anything is. It's like he's an alien to our world!

Author's Response: yes he is....poor sirius...

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Review #17, by emle rose Predictions

22nd June 2007:
interesting...

Author's Response: haha is this good or bad?

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Review #18, by joojoo A Trip to London

21st June 2007:
Hehe. Well this is a fairly good thing you've got going here. You have a fair bit of description going on, and Drea seems like a well-rounded character with loads of things going for her, which I appreciate a lot. The only real thing I can say is perhaps the boy/girl divide in your story. I mean, is it really that realistic to have all of them either dating or developing a crush (at that exact same moment in time).. same in the wizarding world? I mean it's up to you, but it's just food for thought. I'm looking forward to see how you develop this. Good luck with it!
~joojoo

Author's Response: I know what you mean about the dating thing, more in the Muggle world than in the Wizarding world (Sirius hates Hannah, and Remus and Vanessa are just friends). I'm working on a re-write for the first few chapters.

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Review #19, by joojoo The Prank War Pt. 2/Ffee Finds Out

21st June 2007:
Much development, I see.
Hehe. I'm not going to write much here because I'm aching to see how they're going to wake up in the next chappie!

Author's Response: Yes....I was getting very into development right there...

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Review #20, by joojoo The Prank War Pt. 1

21st June 2007:
Hehe... the guys got quite an eyeful... which I don't really think they minded. Anywho, I'm off to the next chapter.

Author's Response: haha yes they did. And they definitely didn't mind

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Review #21, by joojoo Padfoot Goes to the Vet

21st June 2007:
haha. poor, poor padfoot. I can only imagine how uncomfortable that must have been lately. And I really feel for James. His buddy has gone without a trace. Re-unite them soon!

Author's Response: reunite them soon, you say? I'm not that nice... *evil laugh*

Really though, I feel bad for them too!


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Review #22, by joojoo Lost in the Mall

21st June 2007:
Gosh, it must be weird for Sirius to be in muggle America so many years later than he's meant to be. I like how you showed him acting to all the muggle stuff.. and to Ashlyn.
Anywho, I'm off to read the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing so quickly!!! I'm glad you liked the chapter...it was one of my favorites to write!

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Review #23, by joojoo Being a Muggle

21st June 2007:
I don't know, but would everyone in a group of friends have a crush on the other or be going out? It seems sort of unrealistic to me. And why would Sirius be cautious of lying? He was a marauder after all...
Other than that, you've developed the plot further and it's coming along well. Good job.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, and the criticism! I guess you're right about the group of friends...this fic is in need of a serious re-write lol

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Review #24, by joojoo French Lesson

21st June 2007:
Slightly unorthodox, but still quite interesting. I doubt thats he would have let him sleep on her bed. If he'd put a muggle-repelling charm on the door, then I he could have easily put up a camp-bed or something to kip on. Ah well, thou art the author. I'm off to read the next chapter.

Author's Response: Yes....I'm rewriting that chapter for exactly that reason...

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Review #25, by joojoo Predictions

21st June 2007:
Lol. I must admit I didn't like this story at first, what with the whole Marauder & girls thing. (It's almost like Footballer's and WAGs), though the twist in storyline does make the rest of the story seem to be more interesting. Good job. I shall read on.

Author's Response: Yes...this is NOT a Marauders/Marauderettes fic...The girls are meant to be there just to drag the guys into Trelawney's place...

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