Nice one-shot. I'm glad you wrote in how Ginny could forgive Fleur for being concieted, it's just like something she would do. I liked the point of view of each of the Weasley's. Percy may learn the value of time, but he also needs to learn the value of love from a family. Good job. 10/10!Author's Response: Thanks, Ashley! I really enjoyed trying to portray so many emotions in so few words. Report Review
Brilliant! Your an amazing writer, it's so well written. I thought for the most part everyone was in character and I absolutely love that last part about Percy missing them [even though he's still a prat!] Lol, good job. Another wonderful masterpiece! :]Author's Response: Percy is still a prat and I despair to see what becomes of him. Still, I hope that at the very worst he is uninvolved, rather than involved on the wrong side. Thanks for reviewing this story, Jess, and thank you for all of your warm reviews, they really mean a lot! Report Review
Cool idea! That was neat that you let us into the minds of all the Weasley siblings, I wouldn't have thought of it! It's cool. Author's Response: Thanks, Anony Mouse. I wouldn't have thought of it either except it was a challenge on the forums. It was difficult to write each of them in a hundred words, but I enjoyed trying! Report Review
so cute!! i love it! perfect~~ stay cool xoxo lexi~Author's Response: Thanks, Lexi! I had a lot of fun with this one. Report Review
oooh, that was really good! awesome job! ~HermioneWazlibAuthor's Response: Thanks, HermioneWazlib! It was definitely a challenge, but it sure was a lot of fun to write! Report Review
wiked stry. wat does ooc mean? lolAuthor's Response: Thanks, hi! OOC means out of character. Report Review
i liked it a whole lot! good job! also, i wrote a story called 'not a muggle' and the first chapter's in cue - i hope that when you rea it you like it!Author's Response: Cool, rah4e! I'll keep an eye out for it. Thanks for all of your kind reviews. *hugs* Report Review
Different Good but different. I liked it makes you ask for more though. DawnleeAuthor's Response: I'm proud of this one, just because it was the first challenge that I responded to. It is different, though, because it is so short. Thanks for reviewing, Dawnlee! Report Review
This was beautiful. And Charlie's wasn't OOC, it just showed him underneath the facade we know. That last line made me want to cry. Author's Response: I'm glad that you enjoyed it, andharrywokeup. Thanks for weighing in on the Charlie debate. It's a bit difficult to write him, particularly in such a small amount of words when I don't know him at all. Report Review
i liked it it is so trueAuthor's Response: Thanks! I hoped to write everyone in character. I'm glad you think so! Report Review
Isn't it lovely that Bill remembers Hogwarts as a truly beautiful place? " I am in awe again today as I see my bride coming down the aisle, her beauty matched in my mind only by that first glimpse of my home of seven years." I really liked that line. I also liked the fact that Charlie's outward appearance of bravery is perhaps masking the fact that he's in Romania because he's running away from something. Interesting that, and I didn't consider it OOC at all. Loved them all, Ron's was sweet, and Ginny's broke my heart. Well done - a sweet story born of a (very) tough challenge. Hats off to you, PPP. PalomaAuthor's Response: What a great review, Paloma! I'm glad that you liked Charlie- we know so little about him that he's hard to write. Percy's was probably the easiest... scary! Thanks once again! Report Review
not bad at all!!! well doneAuthor's Response: Thanks! It was my first challenge fic and my first attempt at something as structured as drabbles. Report Review
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